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(small class size+location+student to teacher ratio)What motivated to choose rice?



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Author: Sabhi Gull
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Dec 21, 2011, 06:58pm   #1
What motivated you to apply to Rice University? Please be specific and limit your response to 200 words. But I have 237. How can I shorten or improve it?

What first attracted me to Rice University was its location. Rice is close to my home and to the Texas Medical Center. This will not only allow me to keep in touch with my family in Houston, but also provide me with opportunities for analytical research(in addition to those offered by Rice itself)to add to my college experience.
Moreover, the balanced lifestyle enjoyed by Rice's student body adds to my view of Rice as the perfect fit for me. During high school, I took numerous night and weekend classes along with being a full-time student. Therefore, I was unable to pay much attention to my social life. Thus, as an immigrant who had spent only a year in an American high school, this rendered me unable to 'blend' into my social surroundings. But at Rice, I believe, I will be provided with rigorous educational challenges as well opportunities to further my life experiences without compromising the quality of education.
Above all, what I value the most is the Honor Code and the 5:1 student to faculty ratio (which is small as compared to that of my high school's 40:1 ratio). Both of these foster unparalleled trust, confidence, and accessibility between the students and the professors.
The distinct undergraduate research opportunities, balanced lifestyle, and the acclaimed learning environment at Rice will help me develop not only into a successful student but also a productive member of the society.
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Dec 21, 2011, 07:35pm   #2
What night and weekend classes- please elaborate! try not to use too many parentheses!
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Dec 21, 2011, 07:42pm   #3
What first intially attracted me to Rice University was its location. Rice is close to my home and to the Texas Medical Center. This will not only allow me to keep in touch with my family in Houston, but also and provide me with opportunities for analytical research(in addition to those offered by Rice itself)to add to my college experience.
Moreover, the balanced lifestyle enjoyed by Rice's student body adds to my view of Rice as the perfect fit for meRice is a perfect fit for me because Rice's student body leads a balanced lifestyle. During high school, I overloaded myself with took numerous night and weekend classes along with being a full-time studentand was therefore, unable. Therefore, I was unable to pay much attention to my social life. Being an immigrant with only one year in America, didn't help me with my quest to 'blend' inThus, as an immigrant who had spent only a year in an American high school, this rendered me unable to 'blend' into my social surroundings. I've learned how to balance the aspects of my life better recently and at Rice,But at Rice, I believe, I will be provided with rigorous educational challenges as well opportunities to further my life experiences without compromising the quality of education.
Above all, what I value the most is the Honor Code and the 5:1 student to faculty ratio (which is small as compared to that of my high school's 40:1 ratio). Both of These traitsfoster unparalleled trust, confidence, and accessibility between the students and the professors.
The distinct undergraduate research opportunities, balanced l[font#FF0000][/font]ifestyle, and the acclaimed learning environment at Rice will help me develop not only into a successful student but also a productive member of the society.

Don't forget to include what you can do for Rice. They want students who will enhance the Rice enviroment.
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Dec 21, 2011, 07:43pm   #4
This will not only allow me to keep in touch with my family in Houston, but will also provide me with opportunities for...

Moreover, the balanced lifestyle enjoyed by Rice's student body adds to my view of Rice as being the perfect fit for me.

During high school, I took numerous night and weekend classes, along with being a full-time student.

... as well opportunities to further my life experiences without compromising the quality of my education.

This is great. Good luck with school and have fun!

:)
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Author: Sabhi Gull
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Dec 21, 2011, 08:46pm   #5
Guys thank you so much!
So, this is my revised essay, tell me what you think!

I have always been a student who asks questions about anything and everything. Asking questions just because something exists is a way to express my curiosity about the world around me. This inquisition may be as complex as questioning the basis for scientific truth or as simple as asking for the meaning of a word in context. The answers to such questions are what I want to get out of my college experience. And what better place to start my research than at Rice University.
With its distinct research programs as well as its proximity to the Texas Medical Center, Rice is the only institute where I will be provided with multitudinous opportunities for analytical and clinical exploration without going far from my home, Houston. Moreover, the Honor Code and the 5:1 student to faculty ratio (which is small as compared to that of my high school's 40:1 ratio) foster unparalleled trust, and accessibility between the students and the professors. I believe these factors provide an enriching, learning where students can confidently express their concerns and inquiries to their professors.
Furthermore, Rice is a perfect fit for me because Rice's student body leads a balanced lifestyle. During high school, I overloaded myself with numerous night and weekend classes and was therefore, unable to pay much attention to my social life. Being an immigrant with only one year in America, didn't help me with my quest to 'blend' in. I've learned how to balance the aspects of my life better recently and at Rice, I will be provided with rigorous academic challenges as well opportunities to further my life experiences without compromising the quality of education.
Therefore, the distinct undergraduate research opportunities, balanced lifestyle, and the acclaimed learning environment at Rice will provide me with hands on approach to not only my studies but my life as well.
Also does it really matter if my answer reaches a 300 word count when the limit is 200? If yes, please help me condense this! I shall be very grateful to ya'all!


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