a student, a daughter, a musician, an artist and so on
cut "and so on"
maybe make it
a student and a daughter, a musician and an artist.
much more than what fate would have intended for them
much more than fate intended for themI belong to a community driven by motivation and aspirations
aspiration - so that both motivation and aspiration are singular
In this community, I can be of any societal standing and wealth, I belong because I crave for more and believe that I can achieve what I want as long as I try.
In this society, I can be of any societal standing and class. I belong because I desire more than what may seem possible, and because I believe that I can achieve anything as long as I put my mind to it. Here, nothing is impossible.