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Science speaks to me; Queens science undergraduate program


baharak 1 / -  
Feb 13, 2013   #1
Queens PSE for science
Guys do you have any ideas that can help me in this PSE

Science speaks to me. It is the only subject that allows me to see the world in a sharp and deep sense and satisfies my curiosity of the working of the natural phenomena. Science has continued to be my strong and favorite subject, convincing both my teachers and parents of my inborn aptness for it. Although Canada enjoys an abundance of excellent universities, I have selected Queen's Dentistry School with total confidence. I admire Queen's for the kind of well-rounded education it provides. From academic competitions to clubs, student government and Bands, Queen's is the premise of a dynamic student life. I aspire for leadership, so all along during high school, I have worked and tried hard on my extracurricular involvement. For instance, Queen's clubs are numerous and diverse. I strive for participation in clubs where I can polish my skills and learn from others. On the other hand, my preparation and passion for playing the piano, strong intent for keeping healthy and fit, and craving for social interaction are facets of my personality that can best be developed further in Queen's prolific environment. For instance, I have learned, through students, about the university's friendly multicultural atmosphere. Hence, this opens the door to a much desired outlook for me to extend my network of local and international friends. Additionally, Kingston is known for its unique life and festivals. I am very excited at the prospect of sharing the city's life by attending or participating in its festivals. Queen's Band, for example, is a reputable entity where I would like to invest my musical skill in order to experience team performance in contrast to solitary recital. In conclusion, Queen's cutting edge, internationally-recognized education and its community character guarantee a successful career both in Canada and abroad.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Feb 14, 2013   #2
Guys do you have any ideas that can help me in this PSE

Sure.... It's great if you had posted the prompt. Then we know what it expects and we can check whether your answer is aligned with it :)

Science speaks to me. It is the only subject that allows me to see the world in a sharp and deep sense and satisfies my curiosity of the working of the natural phenomena. Science has continued to be my strong and favorite subject, convincing both my teachers and parents of my inborn aptness for it

You talk about science in general and quickly come to dentistry as your specialization. Try to bridge this gap by introducing your passion for your major.

Also, I wish you speak a little more about your major, and how Queens would help you achieve your study goals. You've covered other aspects very well and in detail. That's good, but talk about your study objectives too :)


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