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'School, study, and homework: Limitless' - UC 1- My world..


laurayu70 2 / 7  
Nov 29, 2011   #1
Please help me with any last minute thoughts? Thank you!
Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

In my perspective, being fixed on a specific aspiration seemed very restricting to the many possible pursuits in life. The world provides countless opportunities that living based on one aspiration or even two or ten, fails to consider the potential of the human capability and the vast possibilities of experience. Therefore, to be open to any new discoveries by either realization or impulse, I have no fixed direction, but this does not mean I lack ambition; instead I took the liberty of freely choosing several aspirations, and my acknowledgment that there are endless other paths in life have prevented me of choosing a single, absolute ambition. I have decided that I cannot be held back by being selective; rather I have chosen to be limitless.

The typical normality in my life consisting of dreary scheduled day of school, study, and homework intensified the vague need for more. This undefined "more" is the origin of my curiosity of the world and my desire to diversely experience. The "true" world I have resided was primarily within my consciousness; there wasn't any deeper connection with anyone else compared to the sole understanding of my own reasoning. Due to this curiosity and chosen solitude, almost most of my time was, and still is, spent in either the living room or my bedroom, entertaining myself with the means of media, especially magazines, television, and the Internet. Every time I was exposed to these media, I gradually, but unintentionally, had a revelation that the world is much more frighteningly immense and diverse than what my perspective could comprehend. However, simultaneously, it granted me the sense of the powerful human ability to drastically affect the Earth. History have shown that small people have done many things, and those same small people did not fear venturing out the borders of current knowledge or morality. I wanted to be one of those people, who were limitless in their depth of desire.

Whenever I flipped a page in Time magazine, clicked on link in Yahoo, or watched the news with my stepfather, I tried to remember many of the marvelous news and information. However, my memories were short-lived in my brain, but my fascination left an impression of amazement. Once, I have read about the diverse varieties of potatoes in National Geographic, it was amazing how these potatoes did not compare with the ones bought in a grocery store. Seeing the unique, inconsistencies of nature, I wanted to be a botanist. Afterwards, when I was surfing on the Internet, I learned that the Universe, the realm of existence, was constantly expanding. At that moment, I wanted to be a physicist. When I questioned normality after viewing documentaries showing various mental disorders, my desire was to be a psychologist. I don't consider these ambitions a phase in which they were temporary; I'm still very interested in all these fields and may possibly cultivate more aspirations at no matter what age.

There are endless capabilities of what a human can achieve; I, therefore, cannot settle to a single aspiration or restrict myself to a certain number of aspirations. Holding so many dreams and being open-minded to more potential dreams, I cannot pinpoint what specific aspiration I have, and so my aspirations are limitless.
earynnm 3 / 9  
Nov 29, 2011   #2
I like the theme of your essay but it seems like it is all over the place. I think that you should expand more on the diferent things you're interested in. The syntax in the second paragraph is a little akward and it's kind of hard to follow your train of thought.


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