multi-culture
multi-cultural
Moreover, with great reputation for high technology and education always takes priority over other matters, Japan is obviously an excellent choice.
with a great reputation for high technology and top priority in education, Japan is obviously an ideal destination
but i feel that this sentence doesn't match with others. Because the previous and the next sentences you are talking about APU, not Japan
experience great teaching quality and thus, my full potentiality will be developed .
experience great teaching methods. Thus, my potentiality will be developed to the fullest
Another reason I wish to attend APU
another reason why i wish to attend APU
I have studied some interesting facts
have found some interesting information/ discovered -> not study facts
charmed by
i also find marveled at -> charmed is attract sb in order to make them like you or do what you want
I found incredibly interesting
find
Since high school,
Since i was in high school
So I decided that my study in university would involve studying about society and relevant problems, about what I can do to improve and specifically to change the Vietnamese society
-> so confused
you can simply write : so i decided to take my major in social science which help me to have a sound understanding about social issues that would significantly contribute to the Vietnam's development
If admitted, I will make the most of my ability to gain the knowledge and experiences as an APS student
if being admitted, i will try my best to acquire knowledge and get experience
From my basic major in English and my great interest in social science, I believe that I have the good grounding which, along with my effort, will make me an excellent student.
with
help me to become
culture shocks
challenge
challenges