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The Road--write a book that is meaningful I will Return the favor



silentspringThreads: 27
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Author: YingBin Mei
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Dec 29, 2011, 10:31pm   #1
The meaning of The Road is enriched in Mc Carthy's unconventional writing. By omitting the use of apostrophes and quotation marks, Mc Carthy reflects the post-apocalyptic world where grammar rules are forgotten. Mc Carthy' frequent use of fragments such as "Barren, silent, godless" does not only manifest his spare writing style, but also his intention to provoke reader to read beyond the surface of the text.

The title The Road itself symbolizes the seemingly endless journey of the man and the boy. To the man, survival is meaningless and impossible without the boy. Because of the boy, the man strives to find hope to carry on in the bleak and dying world. Through the portrayal of the man's dedication to protect the boy, McCarthy exemplifies that even in the cruelty of the post-apocalyptic world, the altruism of fatherhood will still exist.

In the book, the man's love for the boy is emotionally shattering. Whenever I read the scenes of the man protecting the boy, my mind automatically reminisces my time with my father: It was six in the morning and the sky was dark. Thick drops of rain poured down from the sky and flooded the road. Though we had two raincoats, one was dilapidated. My father dressed me in the new raincoat and he wore the old one. On the road, as he was driving me in a motorcycle, rain slipped through the creaks of the raincoat and made him shiver. When we arrived at the school, he walked me to the classroom while his clothes were dripping chains of water droplets.

Any comments, edits please, I want to submit it today.
makman09Threads: 12
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Author: Mustafa Khan
   
Dec 29, 2011, 10:34pm   #2
This essay is pretty good. I mean you had everything wonderfully crafted about the book.
I really can't find anything wrong with it. It's just frustrating for me to find any errors because I can't
You talked about the book with a brief summary and then connect to yourself. The only thing I could think that is wrong is just the intro because it doesn't connect will with the other two paragraphs, but I assume you wrote that to convey the meaningfulness of the book to you.

The essay is bound to impress anyone.
silentspringThreads: 27
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Dec 29, 2011, 10:49pm   #3
Any edits? Please!!!
silentspringThreads: 27
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Dec 29, 2011, 11:21pm   #4
Makman99 I commented on yours hope that helps.
AlicegzThreads: 2
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Author: Yue Hou
   
Dec 29, 2011, 11:26pm   #5
I'm not familiar with this prompt. What college is this for?

This is very well written! I am not sure if the title of the book should be italicized or not, since you said that even the author did not use proper grammar in the book.

Good job and I would be grateful if you could take a look at my Yale supplement!
silentspringThreads: 27
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Dec 29, 2011, 11:30pm   #6
Thanks. I will italicize it. I need edits!!!!! Please help.
williamwu123Threads: 2
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Author: Chen-Xi Wu
   
Dec 29, 2011, 11:31pm   #7
TBH, it reads more like a school essay than a college application. Think you need to make it more personal, that is, why it is meaningful to you, rather than what the book is about.
rockbiterThreads: 1
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Author: Brandon Yik
   
Dec 29, 2011, 11:44pm   #8
silentspring:
The meaning of The Road is enriched in McCarthy's unconventional writing. By omitting the use of apostrophes and quotation marks, McCarthy reflects the post-apocalyptic world where grammar rules are forgotten. McCarthy's frequent use of fragments such as "Barren, silent, godless" (are these fragments part of a fragmented sentence? or are these examples? lowercase the "b" in barren?) does not only manifest his spare writing style, but also his intention to provoke reader to read beyond the surface of the text.

The title, The Road, itself symbolizes the seemingly endless journey of the man and the boy. To the man, survival is meaningless and impossible without the boy. Because of the boy, the man strives to find hope to carry on in carrying on in the bleak and dying world. Through the portrayal of the man's dedication to protect the boy, McCarthy exemplifies that even in the cruelty of the post-apocalyptic world, the altruism of fatherhood will still exist.

In the book, the man's love for the boy is emotionally shattering. Whenever I read the scenes of the man protecting the boy, my mind automatically reminisces my time with my father: It was six in the morning and the sky was dark. Thick drops of rain poured down from the sky and flooded the road. Though we had two raincoats, one was dilapidated. My father dressed me in the new raincoat and he wore the old one. On the road, as he was driving me in a on his motorcycle, rain slipped through the creaks of the raincoat and made him shiver. When we arrived at the school, he walked me to the classroom while his clothes were dripping chains of water droplets.


The last part seems a bit disconnected and does not really conclude. Also, the paragraphs don't necessarily match up well with each other. I think it would be a good idea too to add in the author's full name, Cormac McCarthy. In MLA format, the title of a book is italicized, so I believe it would be best do so. Half of this essay sounds like an analysis paper or a book report, not a college admissions essay - try to make it even more personal, if possible.


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