OMG! so if I make this my personal essay I can't upload a different version for another college!? :Ooh noooo. :(((((I would write another essay but this one is just so good that I really don't want to get rid of it. :(do you suppose it would work if I found a way to exclude the name of the college?
ya i thought i could write multiple commonapp essays too at first before my college advisor put me straight. trust me you can only write one :P
Id either add this into ur supplement somehow or do away with it completely. taking out the name of the college will only weaken the meaning.