is the question how has* family/culture/...?
|Bearing this title...lawn jockey-haha,
bearing this title is very
Ju need tew estudy. Ju can do it."
and prove* to the...
, to prove to the world that Latinos are more than just statistics.
the 'you' can be changed out.
little fragment of hope when you are in doubt
if you want, explain more than just being a voice, explain how you did that...
what did you mean by path of perseverance?
why the slang? to emphasize your Latino background?
You can talk about that...about how this is you culture, your background, how people in you community aren't educated in the way that the majority is? that this is the culture you come from. The urbandictionary thing...is that also part of your culture? You don't really mention environment, but I'm not sure you have to. You do address how you've been motivated to do things differently, but can you make that more clear? The who you are part of the prompt you did answer I guess..
what was the actual prompt for this?