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Why online education? undergraduate admission paragraph statement.


lkformtch 3 / 13  
Mar 29, 2012   #1
The statement has to be > 70 and < 100 ,
thanks

Online education is a match for me because it gives me the flexibility to work and progress at my own pace and convenience and review the learning points as often as needed, as I can access it anywhere and any time using an internet connection, it also allows me to interact with instructors and student from around the world by utilizing web and multimedia tools and participating in discussion forums. I believe all that will help keep you on track toward your educational goals.
amardeep singh - / 2  
Mar 29, 2012   #2
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asdasd 3 / 2  
Mar 29, 2012   #3
lkformtch
Try to write shorter sentences.
Online education is a match for me because it gives me the flexibility to work, progress at my own pace, convenience and review the learning points as often as needed. In additon, I can access it anywhere and any time by using an internet connection; it also allows me to interact with instructors and students from around the world by utilizing web and multimedia tools besides participating in discussion forums. I believe all that it will help keep you on track toward your educational goals.
OP lkformtch 3 / 13  
Mar 30, 2012   #4
asdasd, thank you very much
kimuratakuya 10 / 32  
Apr 3, 2012   #5
You make really a good point. But I do not see examples in support of your claim that you can review your study points as often as needed .
OP lkformtch 3 / 13  
Apr 4, 2012   #6
thank you very much kimuratakuya,

please can u give some suggestions,

the word length < 100
kimuratakuya 10 / 32  
Apr 5, 2012   #7
Personally, I think your statements about interacting with your instructor and participating in descussion forums are actually just the examples in upport of your former point. Thus, you do not need to make them look like a new point. You can eliminate either one and add a example in support of your latter point.
kimuratakuya 10 / 32  
Apr 5, 2012   #8
Sorry,I have given you a idea not carefully considered and I am trying to compensate for my error.
This is my version in which I change you underlying logic.
As a method which I can assess anywhere and at any time using an internet connection, online education is a match for me because it gives me more flexibility. For example, I can review the learing point as often as needed.. Furthermore, online education can also allow me to exchange ideas with my fellow students and instructors without any limitation.For example, I can interact with students around the world by participating in discussion forums.Thus, I embrace the idea of online education.
OP lkformtch 3 / 13  
Apr 5, 2012   #9
Hi kimuratakuya,

thank you very much for ur suggestions, i appretiate it, please u dont have to apologize , that was very helpful,

sincerely


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