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NYU is the perfect institution / Why NYU?


Anaury 1 / 2  
Dec 28, 2012   #1
This is my supplement for NYU and I am feeling iffy about it. Any suggestions? Please help!

Smack dab in the roar of one of the world's greatest cities, NYU is the perfect institution for a student who lives for the fast-paced motion of a city without having to compromise key elements, such as a variety of people and a myriad of opportunities that only a city offers. The ambience of its location seamlessly translates into NYU's inner core, which consists of a notable student to faculty ratio and an array of courses ranging from 'classical mythology' to 'Food Photography'. As someone who is applying undecided to NYU, the academic opportunities offered within any of the colleges creates a sense of reassurance within me about enrolling. I am certain that NYU will aid me in discovering what my calling is. I will, without a doubt, take advantage of the numerous courses, especially the witty and the 'not-so traditional' ones. I know I will procure a cosmopolitan and cultivated education at NYU; helping me determine what my true interests are - making the endeavor worth the while.

Lastly, NYU is known for sending the most amounts of students abroad; more than any other American university, something that is of great importance to me. The program in Paris is one that I am interested in. I enjoy learning about the French norm, its culture and its striking language, and I would like to extend my French studies far beyond high school. One can say that NYU is the perfect package, and most, if not all, people will agree, which is why I believe NYU is the academic match for me.
jaegoogle 4 / 8 3  
Dec 28, 2012   #2
Hi, Anaury!
Based on your response, I believe the prompt asks "Why is NYU a good match for you?" or something similar to that.
If I'm wrong, let me know. ;)

It seems to me that most NYU essays mention more about the city life rather than the academics. It's mundane.
Also, yours seems to be tilting toward that direction.
Even if you are undecided with your major, elaborate more on what your current interests are (like French) and how you'll academically engage there.

I hope this helps. :)
OP Anaury 1 / 2  
Dec 28, 2012   #3
No, the prompt is, ' NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.'

Now, does the response seem more fitting now that you know the prompt?


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