At the crossroads of life, all of 18 years of age, I find life to be a treasure of opportunities

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At the crossroads of life, all of eighteen years of age,I find life to be a treasure of opportunities. I find newer avenues opening up for me in every path of life.

Coming from a family of entrepreneurs, the challenges involved in business have always given me an adrenaline rush. My current ambition is to equip myself with a business degree and acquire more knowledge about management,marketing,finance and entrepreneurship.

I have witnessed the extreme toil that my father has undergone to setup his business in the leather industry.I want to follow his footsteps and strive to setup an enterprise of my own.The fulfillment of this goal will satiate my sense of accomplishment to a certain level. I aspire to make significant contributions in my occupational fields by ensuring the well being and economic growth of all the people associated with me via business ventures.

To gain a deeper insight into the various aspects of business management,I would want to pursue an MBA so that my higher education provides me with adequate knowledge and makes me eligible to successfully control and function a business organization.

My interest in business related subjects caused me to select commercial application as my optional subject in the ninth grade and this choice has helped me develop a strong foundation in this subject.

I am confident that this university will provide me with ample opportunities to customize my education in accordance with my unique perspectives and will guide me to accomplish my goals.It will broaden my horizons and provide me with a culturally enriching platform. This will enable me to gain a deeper understanding of diverse societies which will in turn help me adjudge certain situations in life with a much more extensive and global perspective.By being part of the fraternity,i feel that i will be securing my future.

hey can anyone help me in re-structuring the essay because i feel the structure is all haywire

At the crossroads of life, at eighteen years of age, I find life to be a treasure of opportunities.

I find new avenues opening up for me on every path of life.

I have witnessed the extreme toil that my father has undergone to set up his business in the leather industry.

I want to follow in his footsteps, and strive to set up an enterprise of my own.

By being part of the fraternity,I feel that I will be securing my future.

Good luck in school!

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thanks a lot

Oops...you asked about structure, and as I thought it was set up nicely, I forgot to mention that.

ok thanks kevin