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Galileo, Newton, Einstein and Heisenberg - Why physics?


MJGOHARRIZ 2 / 5  
Dec 22, 2010   #1
The importance of physics to me is to understand nature, to understand how it works in a mathematical scheme, and I think physics is a bridge between mathematics and nature. I think the book of nature has been written in the language of mathematics and what we do in physics is to figure out this book.

All areas of physics are interesting to me, but most of my interest in this beautiful science is reflected in professor Lederman's book "From Quarks to the Cosmos". Here the most important part for me is to study elementary particles and learn more about them because I think this field of study will finally answer some of our fundamental questions about nature that remained unanswered to the present .

The factor that makes physics exceptional for me is the way that it studies nature. It sometimes happens that physicists cannot understand nature and how it works. It is therefore time to change the method of our questioning and anyone who wants to study physics should always be ready to change their methods to understand nature. I think the most important factor for a physicist is to choose the correct method to study nature. Another important factor of this science is that it is always unpredictable It always holds something new for us in store, something that forces us to change our method of questioning and I think this is why physics is always exciting for me. You should always be ready for something amazing to happen in physics. People who were both ready for unpredictable things and brave enough to challenge traditional believes helped to evolve physics. People like Galileo, Newton, Einstein and Heisenberg were ready to fight with traditional thoughts about nature and the outcome of their fights is the understanding of physics that we have today .
NausicaA 3 / 5  
Dec 26, 2010   #2
The importance of physics to me is to understand nature to understand how it works in a mathematical scheme. and I think physics is athe bridge between mathematics and nature. I think the book of nature has been written in mathematics language and what we do in physics is to find out this book.I would write this like: Mathematics is the language which writes the book of Nature (however, weren't you talking about physics? Physics and mathematics are not the same. do not confuse the reader)

However, All areas of physicsthis beautiful scienceare interesting for meinterests me and the vast of my interest to this beautiful science is the same as professor Lederman's book title" from Quarks to the Cosmos" but the most important part of it for me is to study elementary particles and learn more about them because I think this field of study can finally answer some of our fundamental questions about nature that were always baffeling in human's history. Okay, did your interest stem from the book? Or are you making a comparison between your interest for physics as well as the book title? Or are you just suggesting an example of your interest? Make this clear

The factor thatWhat makes physics truly exceptional for me is the way that it studiesit is used to explain the forces of nature. Sometimes happens that physicests can not understand nature they can not understand how it works and this is the time to change the method of our questioning and one who wants to study physics should always be ready to change his methods to understand nature. are you baffled by how even physics cannot explain nature and therefore you want to study physics to understand nature? I think the most important factor for a physicist is to choose the correct method to study nature. Another important factor of this science is that it is always unpredictable; it always has something new for us something that forces us to change our method of questioning and I think this is why physics is always exciting for me ,you should always be ready for something amazing in physics. people who were ready for unpredictable things and also were brave enough to change traditional things helped to evolve physics people like Galileo, Newton, Einstein and Heisenberg they are people who were ready to fight with traditional thoughts about Nature and the outcome of their fights is what we have today from physics.

....Now I am extremely confused. You stated that physics is beautiful, but then you continue to explain how this "beautiful science" is unpredictable. I am not a physicist, and I may not understand the beauty of physics, so you should try to convince me that it is. After reading this, I wasn't. You have many punctuation and capital letter and sentence structure errors, which you should go fix prior to anything. Overall, it looks very distracted; you are focusing your love for physics on too many things. These individual arguments are good, but they are not organized.

Hope this helps.
-NV
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Dec 26, 2010   #3
Great advice, here! Also, I think you should take "I think" out of the first sentence, because things like "I think" and "I believe" always weaken sentences:

It is a bridge between ...

Let's look at the beginning of paragraph 2:
the factor that makes physics exceptional for me is the way that it studies nature.
You have a very nice way of writing. I wonder why you did not capitalize the word "The" at the beginning of the sentence. EVERY sentence must start with a capital letter.

Please rewrite the essay based on the great advice from Constance, and then maybe we can find some more mistakes to correct.

By the way, I think you have a great attitude toward physics -- it is meaningful to stand up against old ideas so that humanity can learn.
OP MJGOHARRIZ 2 / 5  
Dec 27, 2010   #4
Dear friends I have rewritten the essay as the following,Please help me more
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jan 2, 2011   #5
physics is a bridge between mathematics and nature.

The bridge between mathematics and nature... you are clever... I think this will impress the reader.

I think the most important factor for a
physicist is to choose the correct method to study nature. ----This is another part that is very impressive. An example will help.

I think you might enjoy the philosophy of Nikolai Berdyaev. He believed that material reality was like a dream, so anything is really possible. If consciousness came first, that means life is like a dream and anything is possible.


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