xinxin 3 / 1 Jan 26, 2012 #1Am I answering the questions correctly? Do I have any grammatical errors? Any suggestions on how to improve this essay? Are these ideals related? Thank you so much in advance!Describe a personal challenge you have faced, or a situation which you found to be particularly difficult. How did you react and what conclusions did you draw from the experience? Were you or others treated unfairly? Were you able to turn to others for support? (1000 characters)Most people immigrate to the USA to find a better life. They also need to face various challenges, usually, during their first and second year in the USA. This was also my situation when I first came to America in 11th grade.My biggest challenge was when I was enrolled in a math class of a language level that did not match my skill level. In China, I finished all these math classes. I believed that I could perform better at a higher level of math class. But my math teacher thought I should stay with her. In order to get her permission that allow me to move up, I actively performed in class, often answered questions, and showed her my ability to handle complex math problems. Finally, she accepted my request and made me move up. By overcoming this obstacle, I was able to get a better education. Most important, I could not have accomplished so much without the help of my teachers and students. Their kind advises are the motivation for me to reach my goals.
