Financial Analysis and Risk Management; Waterloo / educational goals,

I am applying for the Financial Analysis and Risk Management in waterloo. Any comments would be welcome.

Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo.(max 900 characters )

I first became fascinated in the Waterloo's Faculty of Math when I noticed that the representative color of the faculty is purple, which is my favorite. Math is my strength since elementary school, and I regard it as a magical study that can explain all possible patterns in the world. I first came into contact with economics when I was in grade 11, and the more I learn, the more I find that I don't know. I really look forward to learning further economics in university. Financial Analysis and Risk Management, combines mathematics, statistics, economics and other business-related courses, is the career that suits me best and I pursue to take. The superior cooperative program in Waterloo gives me a chance to apply theories learned in class to tasks in the work force, so I would be at a better position than other competitors. Waterloo will be the place where I start to pursue my dream.

Just a few suggestions which I think would read better. :) good luck
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I regard it as a magical study that can explain all possible patterns in the world.
I think of it as my magical answer to all natural phenomena in our world.
I first came into contact with economics when I was in grade 11, and the more I learn, the more I find that I don't know.

I first studied economics.... but the deeper I went into the subject, the more intrigued I got.