Essay to gain sponsorship for Honours degree in Business Studies

I am working for an airline for nearly 10 years and i have now decided to enrol on a Honours Degree. My company policy requires me to write 600/800 words for sponsorship. This sponsorship is very important to me can anyhow check if this essay makes any sense? Thanks.

title : "Outline why you wish to undertake your chosen course and the benefits to you and the company XXXXXX."

My desire is to undertake my undergraduate studies at DIT Institute of Technology.

The course I am undertaking is a Bachelor of Business Studies - Honours Degree Programme for Aviation Sector.

I feel I have reached a point in life where I would like to take the next step, further my knowledge in an environment very familiar to me.

I strongly believe this program will not only promote my academic enrichment and personal growth but also enhance my career prospects. In my opinion people involved in collegiate programs have two main purposes: to gain experiences and certificates that prepare them for future careers and to increase their knowledge about different aspects of life.

In nowadays' constantly changing and challenging work environment it is a necessity, in order to maintain and promote a position in a company, to have the knowledge and experiences that come from attending university.

The skills, spirit and confidence gained from studying help equip for climbing the ladder. Well-educated individuals can carry out tasks smoothly and methodically, with more economisation of time and strength than people who manage their work by learning from their failures.

In addition to obtaining the appropriate certificates, attending a university will provide me with a great opportunity to learn about many different things on both macroscopic and microscopic levels.

While the specific reasons for people to attend colleges and universities might differ, the fundamental purposes are the same: we all want to obtain the necessary training and education in order to improve our careers. Therefore everyone who chooses to attend a university should always strive to reach his or her goals and aspirations. University prepares the individual to overcome difficulties and stress more easily, as well as have an acceptable and optimistic attitude towards obstacles in the work environment.

Let me explain in details about this degree course. The program is organized by DIT in conjunction with XXX - thanks to my previous education I started at year two and I was exempted from two subjects.

Thank you so much Gloria.

I hope I get them to pay for it ;)