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entering a contest(what makes you amazing)


pookiemarz 1 / -  
Feb 21, 2011   #1
i want to be known someday for being talented in music and more so i decided to enter a contest i seen in a magazine ad an i hav to write an esay on what makes me amazing the essay has to be only 1000 characters that kind of aliitle to write on how bad i want this in im willing to work hard to be known ...my habit when i write is bad spelling and repating myself a bunch of times please help me on how to start in how to go about this essay love jasmine
Moe67401 - / 1  
Feb 21, 2011   #2
Jasmine, I usually free writting initially to get an essay of that sort started, by this I mean that I write off the top of my head. After my initial draft, I find the strongest ideas of that draft and expand on them. Another method is to just write a quick outline of what I want to write and then expound on that outline, this will give you a focus for your essay. here is an example:

Someday I want to be known for being a talented musician
1. I am a talented musician
a. I play multiple instruments
b. I write songs
c. I compose music
d. I move people with my music
e. I use my talent to inspire others

and so on, just tell your story, 1000 words is a short space to get your point across so maybe find 3 points to emphasize.

Moe
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Mar 1, 2011   #3
Yes, in the beginning there are 2 sentences put together as one compound sentence, so you should have a comma before "so"
... and more, so I decided to enter a contest i I had seen advertised in a magazine.

Oh, ha ha, sorryJasmine, I was correcting the grammar.
Well, what makes you amazing?! The best way to write about this is to write about what you know best. What I know best is the psychology of language. What do you know best?

I think you should just start by writing a paragraph to explain what you know best. Pretend you are explaining this subject to your little sister so she can understand it, too. Then, after you write a paragraph, go back to the beginning and write a little introduction paragraph. Catch the reader's attention with a clever sentence! :-)


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