I believe that I would be a great addition to the Clarkson Honors family because I am a dedicated, energetic, hard working individual with big dreams and an immense amount of determination to back me up .
My experiences in high school have taught me that individuality, inquisitiveness, and compassion lead to success but it is hard work that will point me in the right direction.
At Clarkson, I can more than offer all of these life lessons that I have learned. My individuality comes from my boldness to be different. I am not afraid to stand out from the crowd or to explore new, unconventional ideas and methods to better my environment.
Give me examples of these and make sure to be specific and concise since you only have 250 words. This is well written, but I just feel like I need some anecdotes in order for me to connect with what you are trying to say.