Discover multiple microcosms within this unique language- supplement for Georgia Tech

This is just a first draft for the supplement. I would appreciate any feedback!

Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech, and what do you hope to contribute to our community? limit 150 words

As I read the course descriptions for senior year one title in particular caught my eye- computer science. This course seemed to have a little bit of everything that I am passionate about. There was the scrutiny of detail, stimulating mathematical problems and simple commands. Therefore, this year I decided to delve into the world of binary and java. Little did I know that I would end up liking is as much as I do. I want to go to an institution that will foster my knack towards this subject and allow me to discover multiple microcosms within this unique language. Georgia Tech would provide me with exactly this opportunity through its contemporary research facility in the computing college. The college has remarkable programs such as Threads that would facilitate my learning.

I think i might have to add something more towards the end but that would make it over the limit.

This is great, you highlighted a subject you want to study (Comp Sci) and described that Georgia Tech will offer you a great education. The only thing I would add to your response would be how studying Computer Science at Georgia Tech will offer you many job opportunities in the future.

Awesome!
I agree that the end is a bit open-ended-maybe you could do this:


Switch that to "This course had everything-scrutiny of detail, stimulating mathematical problems, and simple commands." That might give you enough words to add something at the end!