NicoleElocin 1 / 1 Jun 9, 2013 #1Dear Sir/ MadamI am writing this letter to express my disagreement with the opinion of a fellow participantabout an english course and adventure holiday which recently appeared in your newspaper.The first thing to mention about ist the accomodation which was on the whole doubtlessly worth the money.It was pretty obvious that the staff oft he youth hostel where we stayed gave major importance tohygiene as every room was neat and clean. Occassionaly our instructors made sure that every participantwas feeling comfortable and having a good time. Furthermore they were very easygoing and expertsat teaching students that studying english could be a lot of fun.One more point to talk about ist he variety of adventure sports that were offered there such as mountain biking,rock climbing, extreme hiking etc. In addition there were several indoor sportswe could choose from if we did not feel like being outside the entire day.Inspite oft he fact that there was no food in the hostel most of the participants went tot helocal restaurants as they were not far away. This gave them the opportunity to meet new peopleand make friends. In fact i found myself speaking more english and improving thgrough going out more often.Taking everything into account i would definitely reccomend this holiday trip to anyone who wantimprovement in their english and love being active and so I very much hope you will mentionthis letter in your next newspaper issue.Yours faithfullyNicole
jkjeremy - / 380 72 Jun 9, 2013 #2What was the writing task (prompt)?In any case, this is a superficial paper. Words like "good" and "fun" just don't mean much.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Jun 26, 2013 #4I am writing this letter to express my disagreement with the opinion of a fellow participant about an english English course and adventure holiday which recently appeared in your newspaper.The first thing to mention about ist theaccomodation which was on the whole doubtlessly worth the money..... this latter part is very confusing.... the words "whole" and "doubtlessly" make your sentence too crowded and reduce its effect.The first thing to mention about it is their accommodation which is real good value for money.It was pretty obvious that the staff oft he youth hostel where we stayed gave major importance to hygiene as every room was neat and clean..... you need to improve on presenting your ideas. Tell them more direct and clearly. Then your sentences would sound more appealing to read.
