Creativity is one of my personal traits ; MIT - Attribute - Proud

What attribute of your personality are you most proud of, and how has it impacted your life so far? This could be your creativity, effective leadership, sense of humor, integrity, or anything else you'd like to tell us about. (*) (200-250 words)

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Creativity is one of my personal traits that I am proud of. Creativity is carved deep inside me has changed my life at many moments so far. Creativity is that attribute of my personality that has provided me numerous opportunities to develop other attributes of my personality.

At first year of my high school, spark fest was introduced which was a combination of science exhibition, art exhibition and cultural dance. I was member of the Arts club and thus shared a responsibility with the co-members of club to decorate the school and to help the students to present their art. Many ideas like assigning the task to two different groups, one for each group, were discussed in meeting. In the discussion, I came with a creative idea to paint on walls instead of papers. The idea was deal breaker for all of us as it did both the tasks at one shot. I was made head of this project and later that following year I was made secretary of the Arts club. A creative idea was the reason behind my chance to be leader. Creativity was also the reason behind my success as a leader as I always used creativity in leading the club.

My creativity in doing the work has earned me many honors in field of arts as well as academics. I feel that creativity within me will be my stairway to achieve milestones in my engineering career, as an engineer must be a creator.

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Provide suggestion to improve the essay

Maybe you should say a little about how creativity is necessary to be able to come up with new and innovative ideas, which are what our society is built upon and grows because of. The essay should connect more to how you can contribute in the engineering aspect, and how being creative will benefit that aspect.