| three year old
the pesky three year
I was taught to never start with "but." I'd rewrite this to say "Still, as much as I could annoy them sometimes,"
But as much as I could annoy them sometimes,
I don't think you need that comma.
"For me, I was going through high school at seven."
But when I was seven, I was going through high school.
Pottergirl19: But watching
my sisters' every actions intently at a young age showed meI
don't have to be like everyone else.
"However, watching" and I think you forgot a space :)
Everything else is pretty much perfect. I love your essay, it made me smile. Hope I helped. Good luck! :)