As the daughter of small business owners, it is my drive to know the science behind what makes a business financially successful as well as knowing how to make good financial decisions.
I like if you started with this point. With this you can get a clear entrance as to what you intend to do in the future. Then you can show them how your objectives can be met with what is offered at the Boston U.
Boston University offers everything I look for in a school.
while learning about business administration. The school of management offers a curriculum that will give me the in depth understanding I need to succeed in my career in finance as well as learn about other subjects I'm interested in and apply them to my core major.
Well.... it is always good to be more precise in telling them how exactly Boston U can help you achieve your goals. Go beyond the more obvious statements like;
The finance program allows me to major
.... there are many other unis offering finance courses. Tell them how their program is the best fit for you. For that you need to pick a few points and show them how they are aligned with your goals.