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Boston University Essay - I have always dreamed abou this school


mihirmj 12 / 12  
Oct 4, 2008   #1
Students consider many different factors when applying to college. Briefly discuss who or what influenced your decision to apply to Boston University

The intro and conclusion are similar to what i posted for my carnegie essay so you can skip over those parts if you want. thanks.

For as long as I can remember, I have always dreamed of an education at Boston University. Ranked among the nation's top schools Boston University could make all my dreams as aspirations come true. Through its prestigious history, Boston University has educated some of the finest minds in American History and learning alongside the leaders of tomorrow and the best educators in the field creates an experience that is unachievable anywhere else. Boston University is my number one school for its scholastic excellence, remarkable atmosphere and college town.

Ralph Waldo Emerson once said "to know even one life has breathed easier because you have lived - that is to have succeeded."By attending Boston University's 7-year BA/MD program, I wish to add my name the list of individuals who have graduated from Boston University and have had unimaginable success in their field. By receiving my MD degree from the Boston University School of Medicine, I will be able to help a countless number of individuals and, according to Ralph Waldo Emerson, be able to achieve true success. Boston University educated some of the brightest minds of our time from Edward Zander (CEO Motorola) to John F. Smith, Jr. (former CEO of General Motors) which represent the extensive knowledge and support of the faculty at Boston University. From the wealth of research opportunities and internships available at Boston University, every one of their students is able to leave a lasting impression on the world.

The city of Boston is known to be one of the greatest cities in the United States for its wealth of opportunities. Home to the Celtics, Patriots, and Red Sox's weekend pastimes would be plentiful any time of the year. Home to some of the best medical institutions in the country, Boston also has made its impression on the medical industry. By being located within minutes of the Massachusetts General Hospital, Dana-Farber Cancer Institute, and Brigham and Women's Hospital the students of Boston University have unlimited medical opportunities, internships and a future in medicine available to them.

The legacy and prestige associated with Boston University are the greatest qualities that set Boston University apart from all other schools. With the wealth of research opportunities and the amazing faculty available at Boston University, anything is possible. Because of its educational experience and the Boston environment, Boston University is my number one college choice.
EF_Team5 - / 1,586  
Oct 4, 2008   #2
Good afternoon.

Please see my grammatical and mechanical comments on the Carnegie Mellon essay, because the same issues appear in this essay, since it is in essence the same piece with different school names.

I do have one separate comment on this one:

Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, "T o know even one life has breathed easier because you have lived - that is to have succeeded." Make sure that you put a space between this quotation mark and the beginning of the next word.

Regards,
Gloria
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