Aristotle once said, "Knowing oneself,
I think this expression has been said to come from a few different people, including Socrates... but I have not seen any book that says it is a quote by Aristotle. Please check to make sure you are not mistaken. I think it is better to say Socrates.
Here is a good idea:
I started to develop confidence, and I have improved
myself my public speaking ability and learned more about myself through the campaign.
Be careful of this typo:
As a senior, I`m trying
I think there is an extra space between the ' and the "m"
I like the ending! It is a little long, though. Let's divide it into 2 sentences.
As a senior,
I'm trying doing my very best to help my
fellow schoolmates in every way I can, and those experiences aren't hindrances to
give up on my pursuit of what I
believed believe is right
. Inst ead they have become my inspiration to do what I know is right.
:-)
Matthew and Susen, it's nice that you are participating here. Thanks, Susen, for the great work you contributed.