Furthermore, the teacher has a specific method to make the students interested in learning and drive them to discover new horizon.
The verb tense in this paragraph was the PAST TENSE, so keep it in the past tense:
Furthermore, the teacher
has had a specific method to make the students interested in learning and drive them to discover new horizon.
Last but not least, studying alone easily makes students become distracted and make only slow progress.---I made a small change here.
Anyway, your skill is good enough for toefl. Your skill is good enough to write a novel!! The mistakes are not big mistakes.
In a nutshell, the instructor can pass down both theory and
practicality practical skills, whereas also self-study requires students to figure everything out alone. several strictness.
Those are reasons why being taught by a teacher is the most suitable and effective way to learn.----This sentence is very eloquent!