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BAND/ NATIONAL HONOR SOCIETY; How I can contribute diversity


James125 1 / 1  
Jan 31, 2013   #1
Describe how you can contribute to the diversity of the University.

My participation in band, advanced placement classes, and National Honor Society could lead one to believe that I am a stereotypical band nerd. This, however, does not paint a complete picture of me. This perception of me is incomplete because my interests and hobbies are much more widespread. For example, although I have not participated in sports in high school, I do lift weight at home and hope to one day participate in powerlifting competitions, no matter the tier. I have a wide variety of friends, from jocks to nerds and rednecks to skaters, and believe it important to get along with all walks of life. I believe this variety in interests and relationships has made me a better, more cultured person that would bring diversity to the University of *******.

Thanks in advance!
Th25cc 2 / 90 26  
Jan 31, 2013   #2
Far too short. Lifting weights and having a variety of friends does not allow you to bring diversity to the university. What is unique to just you?
OP James125 1 / 1  
Jan 31, 2013   #3
Hmm.. hell if I know. I'm a white middle class male, haha. I honestly don't believe I can much diversity.
You don't think this shows at least a little variety? Many thanks for the input though.
kabal 9 / 61  
Jan 31, 2013   #4
this is not okay.what do you mean by rednecks? you never answered the question.
I think you should start all over
tiff_007 4 / 7  
Feb 1, 2013   #5
Expand more on your 'variety in interested and relationships'. I get what you were aiming for but try to be more specific and clarify how this would add to the university.


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