Limiting goals is not what comes to mind when I think of my personal goals. Most people have a one track mind; they want to be doctors, lawyers, or teachers. I want to major in something that provides many options and opportunities. I want a college experience that introduces me gently into the "real world". Graduating from a reputable college is important to me. Appalachian State University can help me to achieve this.
Surrounding the college campus is a beautiful town. Enjoying college will not be hard with so much scenery and things to do. When college stress gets the better of me I will have many serene places to go visit.
This is actually fun, citing the first 5 grammar errors and stopping.
1. Sentence 1: Limiting goals are* not what come* to mind when I think of my personal goals. I'm assuming that you meant "limiting" as an adjective based on the context. If not, or rather, because it's even possible you didn't mean it that way, it's also an error of ambiguity, but we'll try not to double count.
2. Sentence 4: "introduces me gently into" does not really work here. If you're going for metaphor, you'd be introduced to* not "into" the real world. If you're trying to describe this in a straightforward manner, you're falling short; it doesn't make sense.
3. Sentence 6: "to" is superfluous.
4. Sentence 8: "so much scenery and things to do" is incorrect. You have to use a modifier with "things to do", otherwise the sentence lacks parallelism and sense, and could be using "much" together with "things", probably the real error at issue here.
5. Sentence 9: "When college stress gets the better of me I will have many serene places to go visit.": I'll just simplify and point out the purposeless use of "go."
So there you have it lady, you made it through nine short sentences. If you have 45 sentences, safely assume 25 hard errors. If there are 90 sentences, you can expect at least 50 errors.