Very convincing essay.
Well said! I agree. It is great that the room reflects the scholarly intention.
Well, I can't really say I understand anything about fashion (If you saw how I dress you would know what I mean), so I really am unqualified to talk about the field.
But I can tell you about Essay Fashion!
First, let's add a thesis statement that will help the reader get her bearings:
Now, not a day goes by without me browsing online to see what the latest trends are and who is setting them. (add a thesis statement that tells the central idea of the whole essay)
Do not capitalize high school.
When essays were first being written by people like Montaigne, it was fashionable to meander and digress, and be very casual. But nowadays it is fashionable to have a clear thesis statement at the end of the first para, and then in the conclusion para drive home that profoundly meaningful idea.
Right now, your conclusion tells me your meaningful idea is "create a successful career for myself" but I think you can do better. I think you can connect this aspiration to your life philosophy, your moral philosophy, your other interests, and really leave the reader with a new insight that they had never considered.