My why essays

#1 What makes Stanford a good match?(250 words-1800 characters)

Without doubt Stanford University has everything a dream school is expected to possess; top academic programs in various areas from business to natural science, alumnus as Nobel Prize winners, perfect location with golden sunshine, and most curious, creative, passionate, confident, as well as intelligent future leaders.

However, what appeals to me most is its pioneering spirit. Unlike Harvard and Yale, which are schools with old reputations, Stanford University is a hopeful young pioneer always ready for adventures. Today's society is still full of poverty and injustice, and the responsibilities are left for us to change the world. Stanford is the one that will lead the change. I, as an individual, have the desire to become part of this leading power. Thus, I yearn to acquire the knowledge, develop the skills, strengthen the will, and befriend with people with the same aspiration, in Stanford to fulfil my ambition.

Another feature of Stanford University that especially attracts me is its Practical Education. Stanford's education is based on industry, on the need of the society, and with this philosophy, Stanford provides its students with numerous opportunities to apply their knowledge into practise, which not only deepen their understanding of the text, but also better prepare students for their future careers.

I am determined to be a person with a critical mind, practical skills, and a ground-breaking spirit, which will be essential for me to achieve my goals in whichever field I choose to explore. Stanford University perfectly fits my pursuits of education, and therefore, it shines as an excellent match.

#2 Why Tufts? (50 words)

In order to succeed in today's increasingly interdependent world, an international view is one essential factor, and it is also what I am determined to develop. Tufts University provides an excellent international atmosphere with its study abroad program extremely appealing. Unquestionably, it shines as a perfect match.

#3 What do you find most appealing about Columbia? (500 characters)

New York City was the first thing that stired up my fascination to Columbia University. Yet after research I realized that it is not the location itself that is most appealing, but the way it cultivates Columbians' aspirations and widens their views. In the leading metropolis of the world, Columbians are able to closely feel the society's development trend, which nurtures a critical mind, a sense of responsibility, as well as an inclination to head the world. These are the exact qualities I am determined to develop. Thus, Columbia shines as a perfect match.

Please revise the three why essays. Any suggestion would be greatly appreciated! Thanks:)

Without a doubt, Stanford University has everything a dream school is expected to possess have;: top academic programs in various areas from business to natural science, alumnus as Nobel Prize winners, a perfect location with golden sunshine, and the most curious, creative, passionate, confident, as well as and intelligent future leaders of the future.

However, what appeals to me most is its pioneering spirit. Unlike Harvard and Yale, which are schools with old reputations, Stanford University is a hopeful young pioneer always ready for adventures. Today's society is still full of poverty and injustice, and the responsibilities are left for us to change the world responsibility to change the world is left to us. Stanford is the one that will lead the change. I, as an individual, have the desire to become part of this leading power. Thus from Stanford Univeresity, I yearn to acquire the knowledge, develop the skills, strengthen the will, and befriend with people with the same aspirations I have . in Stanford to fulfil my ambition.

Another feature of Stanford University that especially attracts me is its Practical Education. Stanford's education is based on industry and on the needs of the society,. and With this philosophy, Stanford provides its students with numerous opportunities to apply their knowledge into practise, which not only deepens their understanding of the text, but also better prepares students for their future careers.

I am determined to be a person with a critical mind, practical skills, and a ground-breaking spirit, which will be essential for me to achieve my goals in whichever field I choose to explore. Stanford University perfectly fits my pursuits of education, and therefore, it shines as an excellent match.

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In order to succeed in today's increasingly interdependent world, an international view perspective is one and essential factor, and it is also what I am determined to develop. Tufts University provides an excellent international atmosphere with its extremely appealing study abroad program extremely appealing. Unquestionably, it shines as a perfect match.

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New York City was the first thing that stired up my fascination to Columbia University. Yet After further research, I realized that it is not only the location itself that is most appealing, but also the way it cultivates Columbians' aspirations and widens their views. In the leading metropolis of the world, Columbians are able to closely feel the society's developmental trends, which nurtures a critical mind, a sense of responsibility, as well as an inclination to head the world. These are the exact qualities I am determined to develop. Thus, Columbia shines as a perfect match.

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Good Luck!

Without a doubt, Stanford University has everything a dream school is expected to possess; top academic programs in various areas from business to natural science, alumnus as Nobel Prize winners, perfect location with golden sunshine, and the most curious, creative, passionate, confident, as well as intelligent future leaders.
Thus, I yearn to acquire the knowledge, develop the skills, strengthen the will, and befriend people with the same aspiration, in Stanford to fulfill my ambition.

Another feature of Stanford University that especially attracts me is its Practical Education. Stanford's education is based on industry, on the needs of society, and with this philosophy, Stanford provides its students with numerous opportunities to apply their knowledge into practice, which not only deepens their understanding of the text, but also better prepares students for their future careers.

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New York City was the first thing that stirred up my fascination with Columbia University.

After research, I realized that it is not the location itself that is most appealing, but the way it cultivates Columbians' aspirations and widens their views.

In the leading metropolis of the world, Columbian students are able to closely feel the society's developmental trends, which nurtures a critical mind, a sense of responsibility, as well as an inclination to head the world.

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Kevin

Thank you, Kevin and atomvik!

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