Visiting Hoa Sen Charity Shelter

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I think that the short essay above is quite wordy. What is your opinion?

Seeing their tears drop while they told tragic stories about their lives before being adopted into the shelter, I felt and a blend of sadness and resentment rise in me. I was sad about their lives, and I was resentful toward against myself for not having noticed such unfortunate people before. Lending a hand in helping ...

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Visiting Hoa Sen charity shelter left an indelible mark on my memory. During the visit, I had the chance to meet and give encouraging gifts to orphaned children. Seeing their tears drop while they told tragic stories before being adopted into the shelter, I felt a blend of sadness and resentment in me, sad for their miserable lives, and resentment against myself for not having noticed such unfortunate people before. Joining hands in helping those children reduce what they had suffered made me really happy. Indeed, the visit gave me a very important lesson - the lesson of caring others during needs.