NYU supplement Why this college?!

Please comment on errors or bad sentences! Thanks in advance!

Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.

Applying as undecided I currently prefer the Business & Political Economy program over the co-major in International Business. Both appeal to me as I want to educate myself to work in an international corporation or organization. I am interested in learning about the interaction between politics, economics and business in this closely connected world. The unique opportunity to gain first-hand experiences in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career. Characters 500/500

nice. i don't see any corrections seeing as how any more characters would take you over.

Although I am applying as undecided, I currently prefer the Business & Political Economy program over the co-major in International Business. , because both appeal to me as I want to educate myself will prepare meto work in an international corporation or organization. I am interested in learning about the interaction between politics, economics and business in this closely connected world. The unique opportunity to gain first-hand experiences in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career.

I tried to make it flow better, it seems like you had information that really wasn't needed.
The last sentences seems a bit stranded, I understand what you're saying, but it just seems to be placed there.

I hope this helps. Good luck =]

Thank you for your help!

Applying as undecided, I currently prefer the Business & Political Economy program over the co-major in International Business.

Both appeal to me, as I want to educate myself on working in an international corporation or organization.

I think it might sound better to change that last sentence to

The unique opportunity to gain first hand experience in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career.

Both make sense, but this one sort of just flows better in my mind. Not really sure how much it helps.