Motivated you to apply to Rice? please help edit and tell me what you think

What motivated you to apply to Rice University? Please be specific and limit your response to 200 words

I am not only motivated to apply to Rice because of its prestigious rankings, but also for the qualities that allow Rice to shine and rise above all other colleges and universities. I am overly pleased to find out Rice has a wonderful psychology program that fits my type of learning. The programs reassured me Rice will be a perfect fit for me. I was won over when I learned Rice is eager to have diversity. The residential life at Rice helped motivate me to apply. Fitting in Rice University will not be an issue with a unique residential program. At Rice, I know I will have a support system to help me through my academic journey with the office of Academic Advising. Rice has a wide variety of student organizations in which I would love to be apart of. The George R. Brown Forensics society will help me continue my passion for public speaking. The qualities of academics and unique student approach motivated me to apply to Rice University.

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I am not only motivated to apply to Rice because of its prestigious rankings, but also for the qualities that allow Rice to shine and rise above all other colleges and universities. I am so very pleased to find that Rice has a wonderful psychology program that fits my style of learning. The programs reassured me Rice will be a perfect fit for me. I was won over when I learned that Rice prides itself on their diversity.

Fitting into Rice University will not be an issue with its unique residential program. At Rice, I know I will have a support system to help me through my academic journey with the office of Academic Advising. Rice has a wide variety of student organizations in which I would love to be a part.


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