The locket. Last words my sister said to me at the airport

The Locket....

"Take it Bilal ...

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I am a bit confused.
Are you trying to tell a story, or should this answer a question?

"Take it Bilal (period) It's yours".

She just told me to open when I reached Amreka.
maybe quotations around Amreka so that it isn't misconstrued as an actual destination.

mqybe "gold thing" can be a little less...amorphous-sounding

what she would do and I do the same.

...inside the small bag. Then I said, "I'll wait till I reach America."

On that day when I went to sleep, I put it under my pillow, and since...

This is excellent! Seriously. It is short and simple, but it achieves something that other narratives do not. You created a real experience for me as I read this. Good luck, I feel enthusiastic about your future as a master of language.

thanks so much...may you please check my poem on Poetry Writing section........
thank you again...

The Locket....

"Take it Bilal. It's yours". Those were the last words my sister said to me at the

airport. It was a small bag; I didn't know what was inside it. She just told me to open it in

"Amreka". When I was in the airplane, I was curious what was inside the small bag, Then I

said, "I'll wait till I reach America".

After the airplane landed, I decided to open the little bag , When I opened it, I saw a

letter and a little gold thing. First, I read the letter. It said, "This may help you to get the

directions if you get lost", then I picked up the little gold thing. It was a locket, when I

opened it, I saw a compass on one side and a picture of my mother on the other side. I

held it to my chest and cried for a moment. On that day when I went to sleep, I put it

under my pillow, and since that day I couldn't sleep without the locket.

This locket means a lot to me. It's a gift from my sister. Furthermore, it contains my

mother's picture; when I face any obstacle, I look at my mother's picture and imagine her

in this situation, what she would do and I do the same. This locket is always in my

pocket, also it has its place in my heart.