Imagine a life entirely different from the one you now lead, what would it be?

Please Suggest- Im not too sure if the flow of the paragraphs makes interesting reading....

When I was a kid, I watched The Jungle Book and it was love at first sight.
I would give up sunday morning sleep to watch the National Geographic specials that used to air on on the television sets.Photography was a late hobby and experimenting with my father's camera took up most of my time.

Few years later, I visited the sunderban deltas and other forest reserves and quickly realized, wildlife photography was something that I loved from the bottom of my heart and it was a combination of two of my biggest interests .
freelance exploring excites me to no end.on a recent visit to South Africa, i went around the country, sometimes alone, to watch spectacular scenery and amazing wildlife on offer.i learned the few nuances of wildlife photography and regularly blog to interact with experts who have made a mark in the field.

watching the most beautiful photography also made me realize how nature is being destroyed .we are unconsciously destroying the habitats we live in.there are many ways to appreciate nature but understanding the holistic value of nature and wildlife, in its impact on the local people , is far more important than scientific knowledge.

Innovation, imagination, thought and patience is what makes wildlife photography a refined art and a career that i would definitely love pursuing at some stage in my life.

You do not address the question. You do not talk about a different life from the one you are currently living. Rather you discuss your interests.
A wrong approach, as you do not answer the question.
I would have offered some input in regards to some grammatical errors you have made, however it will be useless seeing as how you did not even answer the question and you need to redraft your entire essay.

I think that you can work from what you have to answer the question, by envisioning a world in which nature is preserved rather than destroyed -- What changes in thinking, feeling, and/or behavior would be needed to make that world real? How might your own participation in nature photography help to bring that different world into being?

thanks guys....i made a real mess in not answering the question as i got lost maybe in writing about my interest...

I don't think you made a mess! You wrote from your passion, which is always where strong writing begins. If you work from that start, as I suggested or in some other way, then you will end up with an essay that stands out from the crowd because it speaks from the heart about something that truly matters to the writer.

You just need to speak from the heart while also answering the prompt. You might talk about how you would fight for the environment if you had been born into, say, Bill Gates family. That would certainly give you a life entirely different from the one you now lead (I'm assuming). Or, you could be particularly thoughtful, and imagine how, under those circumstances, you might not care about the environment at all, because you would have been raised differently and had different experiences.

thanks sean...ur tips are exactly what i was looking for....

Rewritten along similar lines....please review...

When I was a kid, I watched The Jungle Book and it was love at first sight. Photography was a late hobby and experimenting with my father's camera took up most of my Time. If I were to go back in time, I would pursue a career as a freelance wildlife photographer as it would have been the culmination of two of my biggest passions. From visiting the sunderban deltas in eastern India to spectacular wildlife in South Africa, I would travel extensively to learn about the diverse set of wildlife species and natural habitats. Nothing would beat the thrill of watching a lion pride or a leopard in a tree with my camera. With pedigree, I would create a portal for like-minded professionals to exchange ideas and benefit from individual research. Such a network of dedicated professionals would allow us to spread global awareness on how we are unconsciously destroying the habitats we live in .by organizing photography exhibitions and partnering with NGOs, I would seek to empower local people on the holistic value of nature and wildlife, which is more important than mere scientific knowledge.
Innovation, imagination and thought are what make wildlife photography a refined art and I would love to pursue it sometime to have a creative remit in my career.

Excellent revision! You did a great job of incorporating the feedback you received. Now, proofread for punctuation and capitalization.

Thanks again.