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Extracurricular Short Essay (COMMON APP) - Revision please!!!

shc4everThreads: 1 Posts: 1	Oct 24, 08, 07:53pm #1
As an officer of Key Club international, I learned integrity, and compromise. Integrity was always with me, except by being an officer and having to set up projects, I have learned how to talk with other people and compormise with other people's ideas and make my ears to open to an open discussion, rather than just thinking about my projects and my opinions toward certain things. Janice Lee

EF_Team5Threads: - Posts: 2693 [Moderator]	Oct 24, 08, 11:47pm #2
Good evening. Here are my suggestions: "As an officer of Key Club international, I learned integrity and compromise. Integrity is always with me, except by being an officer and having to set up projects, I have learned how to talk with other people and compromise with their ideas and make my ears open to discussion rather than just thinking about my projects and my opinions toward certain things." I hope this helps you! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com Gloria, EssayForum.com

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