Throughout your essay, it's pretty well done. But I think you need to rewrite a few sentences to make the essay smoothier.(Just my suggestion)
Economics is my passion.
However we can also see the impact of bad economic policy.
Gone are the days when a lone economist can sit alone and weave together a new theory to describe the world.(I didn't understand this part clearly, so try to make it easier to read for the audience)And some corrections:
I suggest you interchange the position of the second and the third paragraph, that would probably make the essay better.
And make the last paragraph longer. sometimes people do that, and it seems like they have just make another paragraph for one sentence. It's not necessary.
Angela Wang, EssayForum Contributor