Col short - what is the most appealing about Columbia and why?

What you find most appealing about Columbia and why?

As the world experiences economic crisis, the unemployment rate also increases. Having the ability to adapt to the changes in career and lifestyle is vital. Columbia College's mission to combine intellectual, social and career mobility enables students to alter with and fit in the constantly changing world. Focusing on both breadth and depth of knowledge and with a student to faculty ratio of seven to one, Columbia College is an ideal place to provide me personal attention and prepare me well for the challenges in the real world.

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I think it's good. I'm assuming there was a very low word limit so given the amount of space you have you ultimately fulfilled the purpose.

Thanks. By the way, the word limit is 600 characters.

Having the ability to adapt to the changes in career and lifestyle is vital. Columbia College's mission to combine intellectual, social and career mobility enables students to alter accordingly and fit in with the constantly changing world. Focusing on both breadth and depth of knowledge and with a student to faculty ratio of seven to one, Columbia College is an ideal place to provide me personal attention and prepare me well for the challenges in the real world.

Nice!:)