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| Do you think that you are a particularly suitable candidate for an award Thank you. »» |
ajayemisi Feb 16, 09, 08:59am | ajayemisi Feb 18, 09, 08:42am | ||
| Common application for New York University How should we know what your reasons for transferring or what your objectives are? You will have... »» |
sukeith Feb 17, 09, 10:40pm | EF_Sean Feb 18, 09, 05:56am | ||
| intellectual pursuit that is important to me, admission essay Also, please do not post duplicate threads. Thank you. »» |
melat Feb 18, 09, 04:25am | EF_Sean Feb 18, 09, 05:49am | ||
| A personal statement- Accomplishment Wonderful work,I like the content,and the flow..although you need to work on your grammar. »» |
sanjaygir Feb 10, 09, 09:01pm | melat Feb 18, 09, 04:23am | ||
| the passion for mathematics and sciences - U of I admission essay Good work!I just wish I could write like you. »» |
MiZZL3L3 Nov 11, 08, 12:54am | melat Feb 18, 09, 04:21am | ||
| WHY DID YOU CHOOSE TO APPLY TO UCF? (revision help) Every year f For the past three years, I've been thinking about what I wanted to do... »» |
sushisbaby Feb 17, 09, 02:07pm | EF_Kevin Feb 17, 09, 11:13pm | ||
| Personal statement for UW app--Please review and criticize! Thank you to all of you who have thus far given me feedback. Keep it coming!... »» |
Mr Graves Feb 17, 09, 12:39am | Mr Graves Feb 17, 09, 08:15pm | ||
| U. of Wash. -- Transfer Application Essay (Personal Statement) Great second draft. Make sure you use tenses consistently, though -- you tend to drift between two... »» |
garrett Feb 13, 09, 09:41pm | EF_Sean Feb 16, 09, 11:45pm | ||
| BYU-What sets you apart from other applicants on unique life experience I feel that essay has some problem. 3 paragraphs above You only talk about how you tried... »» |
sanjaygir Jan 30, 09, 02:50am | shine lee Feb 16, 09, 12:53am | ||
| Common app Short Answer (cyber competition) thank you all! I really appreciate your advice! happy valentine's day! »» |
Noob in writing Feb 10, 09, 11:31pm | Noob in writing Feb 15, 09, 09:00pm | ||
| essay describing activities sinnce secondary school Thank you vey much for corrections... »» |
bidurtiwari Feb 15, 09, 06:45am | bidurtiwari Feb 15, 09, 05:47pm | ||
| Scholarship Essay--grammar, spellings, etc-- (love for psychology) To Kevin- Thank you so much your advice will help me make my essay more consistent and... »» |
4ever2bleed Feb 14, 09, 02:24pm | 4ever2bleed Feb 15, 09, 02:41pm | ||
| Describe your educational and career goals - a summer research program On the one hand, I hope to work as an inspector for food and drink in Asian... »» |
dukle Feb 15, 09, 02:22am | EF_Kevin Feb 15, 09, 01:49pm | ||
| Short Response Questions (2 goals, difficult situation): Stevenson Uni 1. I have two goals that I've set for myself. I will join ROTC program... »» |
xxkixzplayaxx Feb 4, 09, 06:18pm | cokepsh Feb 15, 09, 01:18pm | ||
| MICA application: (Autobiographical Essay) Haha, thanks Kevin. Those are some good points, I know I tend not to explain a... »» |
flio191 Feb 13, 09, 12:01am | flio191 Feb 13, 09, 12:13pm | ||
| U of Michigan Short Answer - Diversity, engineering For [A] I think you should omit the first 3 sentenses since the prompt does not ask... »» |
jucks0r Jan 31, 09, 04:54pm | Baiwanyu Feb 13, 09, 08:07am | ||
| UW transfer personal statement My friend inspired me to follow my interest by taking up a few courses on visual communication.... »» |
gookie Feb 11, 09, 11:03pm | EF_Kevin Feb 12, 09, 06:38pm | ||
| Personal Essay for transfer admission to TCNJ(THE COLLEGE OF NEW JERSEY) this is great. hope you get in : ) »» |
rlaguswjd89 Feb 10, 09, 01:00pm | hannahkim91 Feb 12, 09, 10:25am | ||
| New York Film Academy Yay! I got in! I want to thank everyone who gave me their advice and criticism. Thank... »» |
arbennett Jan 26, 09, 07:18am | arbennett Feb 11, 09, 05:51pm | ||
| Personal essay for transfer admission to the University of Pittsburgh For as long as I can remember, I have always had a passion for technology and a... »» |
ljd Feb 10, 09, 11:57am | EF_Kevin Feb 10, 09, 09:22pm | ||
| USC Admissions Essay (Cinema Major) - an external influence made me laugh, smile, pleased and wonder when will i be able to write like you.... »» |
Zagayer Jan 31, 09, 09:54pm | sanjaygir Feb 10, 09, 08:56pm | ||
| UCF Admission Essay, "a very close family" but the person that who influenced me the most is my older sister for granted like... »» |
shantal14 Feb 3, 09, 09:14am | sanjaygir Feb 10, 09, 08:50pm | ||
| My Better Angels: Read my common app essay You might want to change Earl's name, because "My Name is Earl" is the title of some... »» |
TheGrabler Feb 9, 09, 10:11pm | EF_Kevin Feb 10, 09, 06:58pm | ||
| Background, interests, personal and professional accomplishments I LOVE YOUR ESSAY. I WISH THAT I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU. I like the fact that... »» |
mimi Feb 8, 09, 05:04pm | rlaguswjd89 Feb 10, 09, 06:30pm | ||
| U of Texas, Austin Topic A (every stage of my life) Well, if anyone tries to steal your essay, you show that it is YOUR original work because... »» |
KeonYe Jan 26, 09, 04:20pm | EF_Kevin Feb 9, 09, 07:03pm | ||
| Scholarship application essay - demonstrating outstanding ability to lead No, don't trash the first part! But get rid of that weak first sentence. Then,... »» |
sweethypnotic Feb 8, 09, 06:34pm | EF_Kevin Feb 9, 09, 03:35pm | ||
| Lehigh Supplement A, "never limit my academic potential" Lehigh knows they stand out, and knows theyre great. Do some research, find values off... »» |
Friarup819 Feb 8, 09, 04:09pm | sweethypnotic Feb 9, 09, 03:10pm | ||
| Essay topic A for UT at austin Kent, I hope that your material was not inappropriately used, but boomdizzle99 did not deny having copied... »» |
boomdizzle99 Feb 7, 09, 10:54pm | EF_Kevin Feb 9, 09, 02:51pm | ||
| Scholarship essay, person I admire (my dead Uncle) Ha ha, I was going to say that is a cool idea, because the most influential person... »» |
suehatesyou Feb 6, 09, 09:35pm | EF_Kevin Feb 8, 09, 02:26pm | ||
| Essay for ohio state university thank you guys,I really appreciate your help I will try to edit my essay. »» |
tojusandra2004 Feb 3, 09, 07:56pm | tojusandra2004 Feb 7, 09, 05:50pm | ||
| Do I have to take MCAT for Pharmacy ? Pharmacy has something called the PCAT exam. http://pearsonassess.com/haiweb/Cultures/en-US/site/Communit y/PostSecondary/Products/pcat/pcathome.htm »» |
menamilad Jan 31, 09, 05:08pm | sara213 Feb 6, 09, 01:01pm | ||
| Short answer for CommonApp (the Art of Observing) Some more suggestions: "the Canon A560 I have, though, has become familiar to me" "it... »» |
kelzdc Jan 28, 09, 08:48am | EF_Sean Feb 5, 09, 11:52pm | ||
| Short write-up on internship application Qn Excellent. That solves the problem quite nicely. »» |
ultraman365 Feb 2, 09, 08:52am | EF_Sean Feb 5, 09, 11:39pm | ||
| U Michigan Setback essay ("departed from high school since graduation") Kevin did a really thorough job of going through your essay, but here a few more fixes... »» |
JHazuresky Jan 31, 09, 03:36pm | EF_Sean Feb 4, 09, 09:54pm | ||
| About My thesis statement!(USC TRANSFER) You could go with "My greatest passion is my passion for success." or simply... »» |
vincent0123 Feb 1, 09, 02:02am | EF_Sean Feb 4, 09, 08:36pm | ||
| Why do you want to change careers? Medical Research to Nursing I'd say this still needs some revision, mostly to smooth out the flow of ideas. "I... »» |
destine Feb 4, 09, 10:27am | EF_Sean Feb 4, 09, 08:22pm | ||
| "conflicting cultures" - COLUMBIA ADMISSION ESSAY A really well-written essay. The opening line does need a bit of work, though. When using a... »» |
Pranav91 Dec 14, 08, 06:35am | EF_Sean Feb 3, 09, 08:15pm | ||
| INTELLECTUAL INTERESTS---PLEASE HELP paper is due FRIDAY! Essay copied from another site, we cannot help you and we have to suspend your membership. »» |
lenzie09 Feb 2, 09, 11:55am | EF_Team Feb 3, 09, 08:41am | ||
| NJCU Essay decided to visit various colleges and... ...schools online and believed that had made up my mind...... »» |
Francaruso Feb 2, 09, 10:03am | EF_Kevin Feb 3, 09, 08:27am | ||
| Help with common application topic...transfer Well do the different essays have different requirements? if not you can use the same essay, but... »» |
eric12421 Feb 1, 09, 02:22pm | hunnybun39 Feb 2, 09, 06:35pm | ||
| University of Southern California Transfer Essay Alright thanks, sent in the app. If possible please delete this thread or edit my posts to... »» |
essayheaven Jan 17, 09, 12:53pm | essayheaven Feb 2, 09, 04:07pm | ||
| Scholarship Essay: education and experience at OIT and my goals. You have a fairly strong first draft here. Revising for conciseness is always a good idea. Of... »» |
Jay Feb 1, 09, 03:22pm | EF_Sean Feb 2, 09, 03:58pm | ||
| Penn State - career goals and personal statement - (aspiring engineer) WOW thanks so much for all the help in all my essays Kevin its muchmuch appreciated :D:D... »» |
jucks0r Feb 1, 09, 09:22am | jucks0r Feb 1, 09, 10:15pm | ||
| Indicate how you first became interested in SLU Use quotation marks, like this: "In which state are you going to study next year?" my... »» |
hahieu123 Jan 31, 09, 10:08pm | EF_Kevin Feb 1, 09, 08:55pm | ||
| UMich - Discuss an issue of local concern, today's teens This essay is well-written. If you had more time and space, I would suggest engaging in a... »» |
nurit91 Feb 1, 09, 10:18am | EF_Sean Feb 1, 09, 02:20pm | ||
| How has your Environment influenced Who are you? This taught me to learn about sharing and caring for my 3 siblings equally. I... »» |
santanaelissa Jan 31, 09, 02:38pm | EF_Kevin Jan 31, 09, 11:56pm | ||
| U Chicago, desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future. I was staying in New Jersey and only for a limited amount of time. I did, however,... »» |
Pranav91 Jan 31, 09, 05:27am | EF_Kevin Jan 31, 09, 11:18pm | ||
| UofM-Setback Essay ("be active and outspoken in both business and life") As I walked in a daze down Wall Street, I bumped into numerous rushed business people with... »» |
jakethesnake312 Jan 31, 09, 12:28pm | EF_Kevin Jan 31, 09, 11:01pm | ||
| UAlbany Admission Essay. Unsure about rough draft. Thanks! Wow, I hadn't noticed those mistakes. Thanks again! »» |
ashurii Jan 31, 09, 03:03am | ashurii Jan 31, 09, 08:46pm | ||
| Gettysburg Supplemental essay: please Help me with this essay No, no the second paragraph is fine, I just meant the words to the song. The conclusion... »» |
getitlow Jan 30, 09, 02:02am | EF_Kevin Jan 31, 09, 05:19pm | ||
| UCF Admission Essays Help i added this sentence to the first essay. is it good or bad it the one... »» |
Rocksrntpeople Jan 28, 09, 08:40pm | Rocksrntpeople Jan 31, 09, 04:52pm | ||
| Buffalo Admission Essay Thank you alot Kevin and all the moderators , contributers and members who helped.. i submitted it... »» |
menamilad Jan 21, 09, 06:51pm | menamilad Jan 31, 09, 04:41pm | ||
| my writing and communication skills, help with mt saf So, for example, you might talk about how you are a good listener who can easily understand... »» |
minny Jan 31, 09, 08:33am | EF_Sean Jan 31, 09, 03:57pm | ||
| What qualities or unique characteristics do you posses that will allow you thanks »» |
santanaelissa Jan 29, 09, 08:27am | santanaelissa Jan 31, 09, 02:29pm | ||
| Personal statement AUS It is because I find chemistry so fascinating and the idea of chemical engineering so appealing, that... »» |
netfreak Jan 30, 09, 01:16pm | EF_Kevin Jan 31, 09, 11:48am | ||
| Umic Diversity short answer Their reactions made me and happy and melted my heart and they made me confident, happy, and... »» |
ysleung Jan 30, 09, 02:05am | EF_Kevin Jan 30, 09, 10:11pm | ||
| Cornell: School of hotel administration ...who wants to have an early focus... ...the management of organizations, and ... The... »» |
serendipity123 Jan 30, 09, 02:02am | EF_Kevin Jan 30, 09, 09:57pm | ||
| Stevens Inst. of Tech: how your ungrad will contribute to 21st century Through the application of creativity, inquisitiveness, and analytical skills, engineers collaborate together to build astonishing structures, apply... »» |
yasin391 Jan 29, 09, 04:59pm | EF_Kevin Jan 30, 09, 09:00pm | ||
| USC Short Answers (Cinema Major) These are great. Well written and interesting, and the last one was very funny, it's great that... »» |
Zagayer Jan 29, 09, 04:45pm | EF_Kevin Jan 30, 09, 01:58pm | ||
| umich short answer (250 words) essay! Take out commas that interrupt col rhythm, and you can make it direct and powerful, like a... »» |
thatshot550 Jan 29, 09, 02:57pm | EF_Kevin Jan 30, 09, 10:52am |
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