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Undergraduate Admission Essays

Writing college admission, application, and scholarship essays.

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Letter of motivation to University of Amsterdam - Deadline close, please help.
However, the word "foreigner" is not in and of itself pejorative, as certain ethnic slurs are. If... »»
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Federico
May 25, 09, 12:20pm
EF_Sean
Jun 3, 09, 06:00pm
Ryerson admission essay
Thanks for your suggestions guys. I will make adjustments to my essay. »»
3
sohelmatrix
May 31, 09, 10:08am
sohelmatrix
Jun 1, 09, 02:08am
American Summer Camp in Kayrakkum, Tajikistan
Well, why do you want to attend the camp? Is it to broaden your mind? Meet new... »»
3
Shade45
May 25, 09, 12:58am
EF_Sean
May 31, 09, 02:16pm
Essay about my self: Introducing Yourself to Your Instructor
If I were you, firstly I will think of which one aspect of yourself can mostly attract... »»
5
spider20092002
May 14, 09, 08:46am
eric_ly
May 30, 09, 10:44am
Ryerson undergraduate admission essay writing
That's a good suggestion even if your interest is sincere. When writing an application of any kind... »»
11
nuri
May 25, 09, 05:27am
EF_Simone
May 29, 09, 06:23am
"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay
Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter... »»
7
mishmon
May 24, 09, 02:34am
EF_Simone
May 27, 09, 07:19am
BCC ESSAY on my academic life and career goals - need help and ideas
THANKS A MILLION. its a great help. :) »»
21
newsha31
Apr 14, 09, 05:48pm
newsha31
May 25, 09, 10:15pm
Personal Essay (the college of Medicine)
Simone, I'm so glad you mentioned "indecision." I could not find the words to express what I... »»
2
sammour
May 24, 09, 12:38pm
EF_Kevin
May 25, 09, 09:50am
University of Wisconsin essay help - technically I am transferring
I'd say the essays are pretty important, if only because they show how much a student wants... »»
5
nodnarb402
May 20, 09, 10:21am
EF_Sean
May 23, 09, 05:16pm
qualities that would make you a good candidate for engineering-essay
Thanks for your reply! ^^ »»
7
tjay1988
May 7, 09, 01:46pm
Thuong
May 23, 09, 09:16am
people set the goals in the life which they think they can achieve
Thanks a billion Kevin, I will surely do these things. No I don't have to write... »»
5
Indian
May 19, 09, 07:33pm
Indian
May 21, 09, 12:36pm
Art Institute in Seattle - Short Essay Required, with two questions
I am excited about working for a company that not only supports their employees' imagination and creativity,... »»
3
Mari_Jo
May 17, 09, 01:05pm
EF_Kevin
May 18, 09, 09:58am
CLEP TEST ESSAY PREP REVIEW
PeterV: Write to tell what happened on your trip into outer space. Your essay seems to... »»
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PeterV
May 15, 09, 06:39am
EF_Sean
May 17, 09, 11:55am
Contributions to the Field of Sonography
Guys, I wanted to thank all of you millions! I have received the scholarship. Could not have... »»
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fuzzy
Mar 22, 09, 11:11am
fuzzy
May 16, 09, 01:20pm
Statement Of Purpose for Imperial university U.K.
...to provide me and my brother with good educations. Well, to improve it you need to... »»
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arsene_g2000
May 14, 09, 12:01pm
EF_Kevin
May 15, 09, 04:02pm
BA in gaming, how to start a paragraph?
The opening paragraph should be a psychological attack on the senses; it should surprise the reader with... »»
2
mudasirmnm
May 13, 09, 05:51pm
EF_Kevin
May 15, 09, 08:50am
University of Arizona Personal Statement
That's the one. »»
10
menamilad
May 10, 09, 10:29am
Mustafa1991
May 15, 09, 12:37am
Hopsital Soap Opera - college classification essay
I really like the gallery of people you introduce. However, if this is meant as a college... »»
2
sophiacelise
May 10, 09, 12:27am
EF_Sean
May 14, 09, 11:39pm
Intermediate Level in science stream
Recently I have [recently] completed my Intermediate Level in [the] science stream from one of the reputed... »»
4
harry
May 7, 09, 05:49am
Rajiv
May 14, 09, 11:50am
Essay correction, activities - Yuanyang, China
At the end, you should add a sentence or two that captures what the experience taught you,... »»
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nunya415
Dec 20, 08, 04:55am
EF_Sean
May 13, 09, 10:12pm
DMV Road test personal statement
Something I learned when I was teaching down in the States. The sample text was "A Good... »»
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mikethebunny
May 10, 09, 12:58am
EF_Sean
May 13, 09, 08:57pm
"I entered China as a typical spoiled American teenager" -UC Prompt 2
I just want to say thanks for all the help! »»
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nunya415
Nov 28, 08, 04:41am
nunya415
May 13, 09, 03:37am
"Untitled" General Personal Statement
How about this way: Carrie Bradshaw idolizes them. Michael Jordan markets them. The Wizard of Oz... »»
3
bstrickland
May 8, 09, 02:03pm
EF_Kevin
May 9, 09, 10:48am
UCLA/UCB Personal Statement. I need constructive critism and help w/ editing
Hmmmm . . . was your first airplane flight really that important to you? Try to pick... »»
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mikethebunny
Apr 26, 09, 11:03pm
EF_Sean
May 9, 09, 07:01am
work hard, find the best in each other, and live with confidence.
I just finished advising someone else to do this, but it bears repeating here -- use strong... »»
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shupirate2013
May 6, 09, 06:52pm
EF_Sean
May 8, 09, 06:14am
Personal Statement (the European Business School London)
Cutting is easy, when it other people's writing you are cutting. When you have to cut your... »»
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commeleciel
Apr 16, 09, 03:23pm
EF_Sean
May 8, 09, 02:58am
My Father essay
From my place I am thankful for every lesson he taught me, especially those lessons that I... »»
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menamilad
Jan 20, 09, 06:29am
EF_Kevin
May 5, 09, 02:29pm
Summer Calculus and it's Interdisciplinary Role
In April of 2007, when I applied for Columbia's Summer High School Program, I remember writing about... »»
2
bizkitgirlzc
May 4, 09, 01:39am
EF_Kevin
May 4, 09, 10:17am
Personal Statement ("It is important to break the pattern!")
Thank you all for your responses! It really helped me "clean" up my story. I will... »»
4
annaemilia
Apr 22, 09, 09:23am
annaemilia
May 3, 09, 03:11pm
a shiny new car (obstacle or bump essay)
Working at the family restaurant was one of the darkest moment in my life. You should... »»
6
jinnayfa
Apr 28, 09, 09:36pm
EF_Sean
May 2, 09, 10:24pm
US Prep school admission essay -- my future dream of being a diplomat
so any comments about writing an admission paragraph :( i prefer an essay. it's easier to tell... »»
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emLy
Apr 29, 09, 08:04am
emLy
May 2, 09, 09:14am
Reply letter to __ college for not being able to accept the admission offer.
hi kevin. thank you for your help. I have sent the letter correcting my mistakes. By... »»
4
sanjaygir
Apr 29, 09, 11:49pm
sanjaygir
May 1, 09, 11:32pm
Transfering from UTD to UT Austin
thanks so much everyone!!! »»
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anni
Apr 21, 09, 03:03pm
anni
Apr 30, 09, 04:50pm
Common App--Elaborate an Activity
Really really thank you very much!!! That really helps me out. I don't know how to thank... »»
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Stefanie Chan
Apr 20, 09, 06:07pm
Stefanie Chan
Apr 30, 09, 02:30pm
Personal Statement - Most important invention, and more.
That seems like good advice. I bet it is a very stressful test. »»
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chinhnguyen7
Apr 26, 09, 09:07am
EF_Kevin
Apr 30, 09, 11:25am
Visiting Hoa Sen Charity Shelter
Visiting Hoa Sen charity shelter left an indelible mark on my memory. During the visit, I had... »»
2
chinhnguyen7
Apr 27, 09, 07:35am
sanjaygir
Apr 29, 09, 11:37pm
BC essay. your career and academic goals.
Hey, I think this sentence does not need the "unfortunately": Well, unfortunately it took me 16 years... »»
3
newsha31
Apr 27, 09, 10:08pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 29, 09, 07:53am
Scholarship Essay - My Perseverance Goal
Your answer is excellent. Good job. It can't have been easy cutting down that much when you... »»
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babydoll
Apr 26, 09, 04:08pm
EF_Sean
Apr 27, 09, 11:35pm
Can someone edit my Personal statement for UCLA and UCberkeley..
Pressure was induced by forty pairs of eyes aimed my direction. A drop of sweat scampered from...... »»
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mikethebunny
Apr 26, 09, 02:15pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 27, 09, 01:33pm
Getting advice from older friends or from friends with your same age?
Okay, you say, "By taking suggestion from older friends, one has an excellent opportunity to learn about... »»
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florazhou
Apr 24, 09, 01:39am
EF_Sean
Apr 27, 09, 06:40am
Undergraduate admission Essay-- University of Tirana
Another goal of mine is to get the training and education I need to perform any daily... »»
3
rinori89
Apr 26, 09, 06:32am
EF_Kevin
Apr 26, 09, 08:57pm
Essay for FSU (From Belgium to New Jersey)
You're on the right track. I would point out, however, that you probably don't mean this: "The... »»
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Calinecat7
Apr 20, 09, 06:46pm
EF_Sean
Apr 24, 09, 06:45am
Another school in Washington Personal Statement[transfer]
Kofi Annan was the Secratary General of the UN, so don't just call him a diplomat.... »»
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anella
Apr 22, 09, 06:11pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 23, 09, 05:44pm
New Personal Statement [transfer], University of Washington Seattle
Thank you so much! I will go back and look through it. »»
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anella
Apr 21, 09, 06:10pm
anella
Apr 22, 09, 06:09pm
Statement of purpose / design (student exchange program)
Also, I experienced the foreign cultures and met diverse people during the travel. Oh, I see that... »»
2
jjinvvang
Apr 20, 09, 10:08pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 21, 09, 11:30pm
Transferring from Wright College to Rockford College
Yes, you want to revise this essay to make sure you give a better impression of yourself.... »»
2
kmichelle831
Apr 20, 09, 02:58pm
EF_Sean
Apr 21, 09, 04:55pm
Common app--reasons for transferring, objectives hope to achieve
EF_Kevin: Therefore, NU is the ideal college for me, and... Yup! That sounds a lot better!... »»
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Stefanie Chan
Apr 15, 09, 01:49pm
Stefanie Chan
Apr 21, 09, 12:30am
Common app - elaborate one activity (150 words). Arts and Festival.
Congratulations! You are a good leader. Creative, too. After the close of the school Arts... »»
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joanna2007114
Apr 19, 09, 11:32am
EF_Kevin
Apr 20, 09, 10:18am
Scholarship Essay Help (Educational Goals)
Thanks for the help I'm going to make the corrections you suggested. »»
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gb9570
Apr 16, 09, 03:49pm
gb9570
Apr 19, 09, 11:43pm
Bentley University Transfer Essay
What past work experiences, skills, capabilities do you already have that you can bring onto campus?... »»
5
nightgal545
Apr 13, 09, 08:52am
babydoll
Apr 19, 09, 02:27pm
An Essay on university admission -UG (myself, family, school interests)
Well, you already seem to have made a lot of progress on this essay, but there is... »»
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Finalelement
Apr 11, 09, 06:30am
EF_Sean
Apr 18, 09, 04:42am
Boston U Int. (Experiences with Dad, Confidence, Stock Market)
Don't be messing with the language! It's when the dialectic subtleties we use begins to get... »»
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AFS
Apr 1, 09, 12:02am
EF_Kevin
Apr 17, 09, 06:03pm
UCF Essay (bump in the road; why UCF)
Everyone faces obstacles. Some of them are small, and they will be easy to go through. overcome... »»
3
zxcvbnm
Apr 16, 09, 02:34am
EF_Sean
Apr 16, 09, 11:27pm
Gambia to Georgia -- entrepreneur in the resturaunt business.
Thank it helped alot....!!! »»
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Brownpd
Apr 2, 09, 12:12pm
Brownpd
Apr 16, 09, 12:12pm
a paragraph that updates my activity in a waitlist letter.
Great! Good luck, I hope it is well-received. »»
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jianxian
Apr 10, 09, 09:38pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 14, 09, 08:31am
Appeal essay, UC Davis of Engineering
I'm very appreciative that University of California Davis has offered me an opportunity for an appeal. After... »»
2
xwy
Apr 13, 09, 07:35pm
EF_Sean
Apr 14, 09, 06:29am
I need help review this essay ("the greatest goal you hope to achieve")
Please give a little bit more substantial help to other members! Then, I'll spend time helping... »»
2
GrammarFool
Apr 12, 09, 06:18pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 13, 09, 10:49am
Scholarship Essay - Effect of Presidential Election
Yeah, don't use the forum quite that way. It should not be a resource the enable... »»
3
cali
Apr 12, 09, 01:01pm
EF_Kevin
Apr 13, 09, 10:18am
Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future
Thanks Sean. I'll let everyone know if I get the scholarship. »»
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arbennett
Feb 17, 09, 11:29am
arbennett
Apr 11, 09, 01:24pm
UCF admission essay (why did I choose to apply and family influence)
Thank you so much it has been very helpful! »»
3
gizzy1376
Apr 8, 09, 08:13pm
gizzy1376
Apr 9, 09, 06:31pm
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