This could be a little more intellectual. How about some professors from whom you'd like to learn about your favorite subjects. Maybe one of them has written some articles you have read. Present yourself as someone who is ready to jump into life as a serious scholar.
Us a comma whenever you have a compound sentence like this:
The tour guides I had that day seemed genuinely honest and enthusiastic when they talked about how great it was to be a student at OSU, and I want to experience the type of college life that they described.
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