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'vital in our everyday lives' The Importance of Business Education COMMERCE


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Dec 24, 2013   #1
Hi, I need help editing this piece. Thanks! XD

What is the role of business education?
Business has become vital in our everyday lives. Economically-speaking, it plays a major role in providing products and services and creating job opportunities, thus improving the lives of humans. The various disciplines of business such as accounting, finance and marketing indirectly influence our daily lives and serve as the backbone of the corporate world. In today's society, a degree in commerce is extremely useful and practical because an in-depth knowledge of business applies in every field and industry. It also acts as a stepping stone to new opportunities and experiences. Business studies help students to develop the essential transferable skills that employers demand, which include superior communication skills, self-reliance, and analytical capabilities

From its dynamic environment to its fast paced productivity, I see business as a high energy and exciting field. It is an industry with unlimited growth potential, constantly expanding and growing to meet the needs of customers. Studying business enables individuals to cope with change and become equipped for life in this new era. As Peter Drucker once stated, "The entrepreneur always searches for change, responds to it, and exploits it as an opportunity."
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Dec 24, 2013   #2
Business has become vital in our everyday lives.

Business plays a vital role in our everyday lives.

The various disciplines of business such as accounting, finance and marketingindirectly influence our daily lives and serve as the backbone of the corporate world.

.... I don't understand why you said "indirectly influence our daily lives"? I don't see much significance in that statement for your overall idea.

In today's society, a degree in commerce is extremely useful and practical because an in-depth knowledge of business applies in every field and industry.

A degree in commerce provides students with an in-depth knowledge and exposure in business which they can skillfully apply in every field and industry.
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Dec 24, 2013   #3
Hey, thanks for the editing! Anything that you feel that I should take out or include?


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