Hello,
I really need your help. I am about to pass this assignment in school, and I want to make it sure that my grammar and constructions are correct. Please help me.
PERSONAL VISION:
I, a compassionate and dedicated educator inspired by a passion and burning desire for learning, is a partner of the students in building their future through recognition of and enriching their unique potentials and individualities. By exemplifying professional competency and strong moral character, I am making it sure that students obtain adequate knowledge, appropriate skills, and right attitudes to achieve their highest potential, that is, to become life-long learners, globally competent professionals, catalysts for change, assets to the society and above all, God-loving citizens of the country.
I value my partnership with the stakeholders of the society (parents, school, and community) and the part they play in realizing this vision for Veritas et Amor (for Truth and Love).
PERSONAL MISSION:
I, espousing the ideals of Philippine Normal University, is committed to the holistic development of the students, that will make them courageous and confident enough in facing and building their own future.
I am committed to empower all students by providing them the quality education they deserve and various learning opportunities to equip them with critical thinking skills and global perspective committed to achieving excellence.
I am committed to utilize innovative techniques that will make learning both productive and fun.
I am committed to maintain a nurturing, safe, and healthy learning environment where students feel secure in expressing their opinions without being ridiculed nor feeling their safety is threatened.
I am committed to bring a positive attitude, an open mind, consistency, diligence, and warmth in the practice of my profession in the hope that I can ultimately inspire and encourage such traits in the children as well.
I am committed to guide the students firmly but with kindness and impartiality, and support them appropriately in all their endeavors.
I am committed to grade students' academic work fairly and objectively.
I am committed to bring encouragement and motivation to class every day.
I am committed to respect the students' religious affiliations and be sure not to impose my own religious beliefs into them.
I am committed to establish and maintain good partnership and working relationship with the stakeholders of a society (i.e., the parents, school, and community as a whole).
thank you so much :-)
This is good. Some of these sentences are kind of long, though...
PERSONAL VISION:
I am committed to establishing and maintaining a good partnership and working relationship with the stakeholders of a society (i.e., the parents, school, and community as a whole).
Thank you so much ma'am for extending your help. Thank you allotting your time reading my articulations and making necessary corrections. I really appreciate it. It's my first time here in Essayforum, and I should say I'm so lucky that I found this website tonight.
However ma'am, if it's not too much, can I have your idea on how should I end my articulations? is it necessary for me to put some ending statements in my personal mission, or it's enough already?
Again, thank you so much ma'am :-)
