I know that my opinion goes unnoticed by most, but when a teacher cares about their students and wants to see them succeed, it is one of the most important things in my life and I am grateful to have some if not the best teachers who understand how important it is to ask for my opinion and get me involved in the communication in the classroom since I am such a quiet person.
This is a really long sentence that seems to ramble on. I think you could split it into a couple of sentences to make your point more clear.
Also I don't think you should start your essay with the restatement of the prompt. Try to creatively introduce the subject rather than using the same wording as the prompt.
It is to me feel important,
I don't know what you're trying to say here.
I would also look over the grammar for the essay. You're missing a lot of commas and I think you should vary the sentence structure more.