University of Minnesota (Twin cities) Why am I applying for chemical engineering?

Please provide a brief statement of your academic interests and career goals as they relate to your major choice or choices, including if you are still deciding on a major. (600 characters)

This short answer with a general question makes me feel lost, so I need a lot of help for this essay. Please take a look and give me your opinion. Please, thanks

Being surrounded by science lovers has always been my dream. I love listening to others' conversation over new environmental friendly inventions and new applications on smart phone to help life more manageable. Therefore, I chose to be a math and chemistry tutor at my college so that I can listen to other tutors talking about their research on ancient math theories and their discussion over new inventions. I am applying to University of Minnesota for chemical engineering major because this school is packed of innovative engineer students. I hope to share my chemistry passion with them and cooperate to discover new practical and useful chemical reactions.

Ngoc, the academic interest is somewhat represented in your statement, but the goals are missing. The problem, is that you spent most of the essay giving us the background of your interest in science and technology rather than just providing a direct answer to the questions asked. with 600 characters, you should have simply started off the essay with the direct reason for your interest in science which is the development of future chemical technology and the cultivating of current sci-tech ideas. Your goal, is to achieve this high level of understanding of the requirements of your future job through the academic exposure the University of Minnesota can provide you through their various classes, research labs, mentor programs, and internship programs. Research the university course offerings online via Google and YT. Note the academic programs that the students in the same major as you want to take are excited about and base your response upon your understanding of those activities / classes. Then you can develop your own line of reasoning as a statement response to this prompt.

You need to answer the question specifically what your career goals are.
Like what you hope to accomplish with the knowledge you will gain at this institution.
an advancement that You would like to make in the field of chemical engineering.
Where do you want be at in 4 or 5 years after you graduate?