This is a unique abstract answer to a prompt that will normally have common answers. You took us on the adventure with you. Engaging all of our senses and then giving us a reason to believe that this would indeed be a unique place where you, a big football fan, would feel most content. It is almost as if you are telling us that this memory is enough to inspire you to always strive to be the best that you can be in everything that you do. That said, I would like to make some suggestions regarding grammar problems that need correcting below:
Standing in front of the iconic stadium felt nothing short of a miracle. The stadium is seen by many as the benchmark for top league stadia developments not only in Europe but in the world. Its design is a radical break from the traditions of the "English style" stadia. The Emirates Stadium is sublime and intimidating.
- You need to ease us into the scenario you are describing. Introduce the topic to us by restating the prompt. That way, when you slide into the description, we know the reason why you are recalling this particular event and place.I entered the stadium using the tickets we have bought a month earlier.
- ...tickets we
had bought...
The upper tier is contoured to leave open space and the roof is significantly canted inwards. These features are meant to provide as much airflow and natural light to the pitch as possible. The stadium also gives an illusion that supporters in the upper tier on one side of the ground are unable to see supporters in the upper tier opposite .
- ... to leave
an open space... The stadium
gave an illusion... in the
opposite upper tier .
The chants intensified as the game goes on.
- ... as the game
went on.
I'm a part of something special.
- ... I
was a part of something special.
Indeed, life works in a mysterious way. You could discover yourself in the most unexpected of places and time. That experience in the stadium left a big impact on my life. A trip to a football stadium that was meant to be an exciting experience turned out to be more than that. That was the place that shaped me into what I am today and what I aspire to be. That was the place where I found myself.
- Expand upon this statement. You need to explain how you found yourself in that stadium. How did that happen? What did you learn about yourself during the experience? We need to get an idea and a clear understanding of why you said that.Iwill travel to that part of my mind and imagine myself being an Arsenal player and the fans are chanting my name. Every time I need a mood lift or just to relax, I will once again visit that part of my mind and recall the experience being among the fans and how they made me feel like I'm a part of the big Arsenal family. For others, the memory of watching a football game might just be another exciting experience but for me, the memory has created a special place in my mind; it is a place where I'm perfectly content.
- ... recall the experience
of being among...
I hope the suggestions I made will make the essay more complete and satisfactory in your opinion. I feel that these changes are necessary to clean up the message of the essay :-)