Traditional music give the info about a whole country; international entertains

There are various types of music in the world.Type of musics are increasing day by day in this time.Pop,Rock,Classical,Hip hop, Folk,Modern,Jazz,Metal and Heavy metal are the example of the music

The music is the faithful friend of everyone.It is almost hard to live without music for human being.

Traditional music of a country plays vital role for a particular country.Every country has their own traditional music.It is the symbol of the country which gives the identity to the country around world.Likewise,other type of musics entertain the people and make happy and cool.music has become a part of people life .It seems positive effects in the people life.When a man listen to the music, he or she looks happy.So,we can say that music is the medicine of the human life who are in sorrows.People totally forget their troubles by listening music.Similarly, a country gives their introduction by their traditional music.It is more important than other music for the a country because it represents the whole people,culture of the country.for example, African people have their traditional song that represents the whole African and their culture allover the world.

A traditional music give the information about a whole country.Like,culture, religious, different groups of people and their caste.But other type of musics only entertain the people and make happy when they are in sorrows...

Type of musics are increasing I think it should be is
their culture all over the world.
you give similarly examples like "It is more important than other music for the a country because it represents the whole people,culture of the country.for example, African people have their traditional song that represents the whole African and their culture allover the world. " and "A traditional music give the information about a whole country.Like,culture, religious, different groups of people and their caste. "

I think first you should focus on your essay and then give more examples
however your essay is not bad cause i did not see grammar mistakes
Good luck

almost hard ==> It's awkard and wrong. Just say hard or impossible
friend of everyone. ==>for everyone
Every country has their own traditional music ==>itws own
Hi, this is just some of your mistakes in this paragraph. You lack both examples and mechanics for your essay.
Consider using more time to do revision. Good luck :)

thank you so much all of you..