In addition to any work experience that you listed on your application, please tell us how you spent your most recent summer vacation.
This summer was full bliss to me. I was admitted as a substitute teacher at Ithan Elementary School. Not only was I happy to be a part of school faculty, but I was also contented by the fact that I could work at my elementary school. It was as if the table had turned upside down. I confidently called Hunt to whom I used to refer to Mr. Hunt. Teaching little kids allowed me to reminisce of my early childhood. It was a good time for me to look back in time and contemplate about who I am.
This summer was full of bliss to me .
Not only was I happy to be a part of school faculty, but I was also contented by the fact that I could work at my elementary school.
Was Hunt a teacher? if so state I confidently called a teacher Hunt, a teacher i used to refer to as Mr. Hunt.
good luck :)
Thanks you've been a great help.
Any more criticism?
I agree but I think you should say...
I confidently called a teacher Hunt, whom I used to refer to as Mr. Hunt,
thanks!
do you think other grammers are fine?
I was not only happy to be a part of school faculty, but also contented by the fact that I could work at my elementary school.
I was invited to address a teacher, whom I used to refer to as "Mr. Hunt," simply by using his last name as his friends do: "Hunt."
Teaching young children enabled me to reminisce of my early childhood.
That must be a great experience!! Try my suggestions, above.
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I know it is tough to adjust the limit..
Thanks Kevin!!
but is there another way to make it fit within 500 characters????
Can any one help with word limit please???? the deadline is coming soon and I am really worried.
y word program shows the revision i gave you to be 447 characters. Am I missing something? Good luck!!!
If you need to take out more, get rid of the sentence about the table being turned upside down.
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