Don't worry, after one year with me, you will master the way of listening to random music as I do.
haha. isn't there only ONE way of listening to music? by our ears? or do you mean like hanging upside down, in the bathroom, while you sleep...etc? quite informal, but I like the idea.
You will see that is a nice trait I have after several months not having to do the dishes.
more formal here? the jocular tone doesn't quite fit everywhere
I love fairness AND inequality. Fairness is that everything, in my philosophy, should be shared equally. Inequality is that sometimes you will find yourself using the whole room for the entire week when I decide to move my stuffs to Starbucks.
again, the informal..I'm guessing your gonna use that the whole way through. ok. but stuffs? make these two ideas flow more rather than just one ideal and the other an example. Why CAPS the AND? same with next sentence..
sharing and solitary are not parallel nouns
Cal problems? calculus? how is that sharing?
annoying laptop? WHAT:?
I love fast car and want some day can buy one myself, but riding a bike along the beach gives me enjoyment as well.
I drive fast car too :S. um. the grammar went wack here. what does this have to do about you? about learning about YOU?
Last, if you ask me about partying, everything I'd say is: "Follow the flow of life, and you will find where you should stand".
To know anything else about me, please wait until I have got admitted.
the quote, it's not much about you unless you say that it is. also...the admitted thing. Iono. it's your call.. but I'd leave it out
Comments: informal much, information much too much. I'm not saying that I didn't do something similar, but maybe narrow down to a few things that are more important to you? show how each thing reflects who you are and how these are just a list of things you do. The double comparison idea/technique is nice, but maybe mention that you ADORE opposites? that you don't just stick with the conventional, the norm, but that you hang on the edge? good luck