To Solve Air Pollution
As the population of the world increases rapidly,the realese of the chemical substances is also increasing. Therefore ,people exposed to air pollution. Morever people has been increasing use of chemical substances such as spray,cleaning supplies,parfume eg so air pollution is becoming a serious problem. According to Evans (2010),the problem is inside our homes and materials used in home many times,we release poisonous gasses to nature for years. Carpets,shower curtains, paints,upholstery,plywood,particle board ,cabinets,computers and synthetic materials all release the poisonous gasses and chemicals. As most homes are good isolated,its letting back those poisonous trapped interior for us to breathe. Morover air pollution causes many events. One of them is the greenhouse effect. Carbon dioxide is produced when fuels are burned. Plants converts carbon dioxide, but because of human activities , release of carbon dioxide is higher than plants can process. Thus greenhouse effect is made in the world and many forest are dameged by acid rains. This is increased release of carbon dioxide as a result of this temperature is also increase few degrees and it will affect climate changes and polar ice caps may be malt. These are all causes of air pollution and daily life is affected negatively. Briefly there are three main princible strategies to solve the air pollution problem which can be categorised as energy efficiency ,reduce waste and move to non-polluting renewable of energy production.
In the first place and as the simplest strategy,reducing waste can be considered. Waste products increasing day by day and they have the effect of air pollution highly. If people care to reduce waste, the problem can be solved. To begin with, people choose eco-friendly product instead of non-environmentally friendly product such as handcraft products, paper bags and notebook. Therefore they can reduce waste. Secondly people can use hybrid cars and they can become prevolent using hybrid cars. This will not only increase waste of environment but also people attent to protect nature. Finally we can reycle our products. We are grouping in the form of waste ; glass,plastic ,paper. We send them to recycling. In this way we reduce waste. This in three ways, we reduce waste so we can prevent the speared of air pollution.
As previously stated, the second way to deal with air pollution crisis can be solved energy efficiency. People prevent unnecessary gas emissions by using energy energy efficiency. If they provide energy efficiency, they can reduce using fossil fuels so that they can prevent air pollution. First of all, people can benefit from sunshine. They can install solar-powered appliances in their home and job. By doing this , they can have a very large economic saving. The energy savings in a home and job reduce energy consumption. For example, they use combining insulation, high R-value windows, wheather sealing, efficient hot water heating and other that minimize energy use. Thanks to energy efficiency , they expect to see lower energy bills and lower water bills. According to Candy (2010), people can be save energy with some steps. To illustrate, they can check their windows for cracks and breaks in the seals bu its long way to savings energy. Anaother step is adjust their thermostat before going to sleep. By doing this, their thermostat doesnt work for hours. It is only working set hours. Secondly using time efficiency is another part of energy savings. For example the sun heats day time but it coals at night so they must use thermostat for to heat their house. This is very expensive for them. Therefore if they set up their time, they can use energy much longer and they will not have to use the thermostat. Finally people can establish organisations to direct people to use energy efficiently or can support existing organisations. Actually we have very important organisations that inform to people about energy efficiency. These organisations are doing very important things. We can give them at least moral and financial support by joining them. Thus we can provide energy efficiency. By this ways, people can prevent a lot of elements of polluting the enviorment by using energy energy efficiency and they would awoid breathing polluted air.
The third way to move non - polluting renewable of energy production. Currently widely used in fossil fuels run out and fossil fuels pollutes the air too much. Therefore people tend to non-polluting renewable energy production such as wind, water , and sun beat. Wind power is very important source for generating electiricity. According to Jacobson, the important way to improve energy security,mitigate reduce the number of death caused by air pollution to storm and bluster in the wind. It is very cheap than nuclear power plant and fossil fuels and it is cleaning(Stanford univercity(2008)by Louis Bergeron). Another part of non-polluting renewable product is water rippling is another important way to product energy without polluting air. If goverment establish baraj, they can provide electiricity for people. It is effective way to protect air pollution to people. Actually this way has been used worldwide for a long time to generatic huge amounts of power from water stored. In this ways, people save energy as well as they protect nature and they dont pollute the air. They would do something that does not harm for humans.
To sum up,reduce waste, energy efficiency and move to non-polluting renewable of energy productivity are the three main ways to solve air pollution problem. Reduce waste is the easiest way to solve air pollution because it needs much less labor work than the other ways but it will be satisfied for to celaning environment. Energy efficiency is the best way to solve air pollution because of helping by whole people that they can help and support energy efficiency. Because energy efficiency save both the enviorenment and their money and move to non-polluting renewable of energy production is still the most diffucult way to solve air pollution. The informations show that people pay more attention to this issue every day and science and technology is developing rapidly people believe that experts will solve the problem. We should give more effort to solve this problem until that day.
Hi there sulooz07. I read your essay and below are my comments: (I hope they will be helpful to you :))
1. Your introduction is good, but somehow confusing. Especially, when you described some processes. I would say, just make it more simpler and easy understandable. Think about a reader who reads 100 similar essays at a time.
2. Grab your reader's attention from your first 2 sentences, and make your essay interesting from 1st sight till the end.
3. Your second paraghraph is good just counting your ideas of solution. Why? I think you better Give your 1st idea and explain it thoughout.
4.Pay closer attention to you grammar.
5. I liked your conclusion, that is very clear.
Overall, I liked your essay, btw, is it for essay contest or something like this?
