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People attend college or university for... (knowledge, personality, friends)


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Aug 7, 2010, 09:38am   #
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Q:People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



People attend college or university for plenty of reasons. No doubt to say that attending college or university provid people the chance to experience new things, the access to get well prepared for jobs , as well as the opportunity to increase knowledge. In addition, attending collge or university contribute to forming the person's personality and make friends on future work field.

One of the most attracting reasons for people to go to college or university is that these institutions offer people chances to increase knowledge. Professional educaters there provide students well educational system. This makes colleges and universities almost the best places for people to fullfill their brain in not a short time.All of this, both offer the students the benefits to have better jobs and the well educated brain to have a better way to understand the world.

In addition, attending collge or university contributes to helping students to form their personality. On one hand, the circumstance there provide students to experience different things, to make friends from almost all over the world. With some chances to exchange to some other countries and the chances to have lectures from some successful former schoolmates, it is not difficult for the students to find which way they want to go, as well as which kind of person the they want to be. On the other hand, compared with home school or self-learning, studying in college or university make it possible for the students to communicate with the professors to talk about life and career plan. One of the most benefit points of this is that the talk with the educaters will avoid the students to make some mistakes and make eazier to success.

Furthermore, the years in college or university is almost the best time for the students to make friends on the certain future work field. Not only does this kind of relationship helps a person to gain more job chances and promotion opportunities in certain field, but also helps to get better ways on solving certain problems on that field. Beyond that, academically, school friends on the same research change opions more freely and this kind of communication will probably stimulates the ideas explore new theories and the new approach to new solutions.

Adimittedly, there are also other ways for a person to achieve sucess. But having education in collge or university provid the best way to achieve that.

Aug 7, 2010, 11:40am   #
People attend college or university for plenty of reasons. No doubt to say that attending college or university provides people with the chance to experience new things, and the access ability to get well prepared for jobs, as well as the opportunity to increase knowledge. In addition, attending collge or university contributes to forming the a person's personality and making friends on future work field.

One of the most attractive reasons for people to go to college or university is that these institutions offer people chances to increase knowledge. Professional educaters there provide students well with a good educational system. This makes colleges and universities almost the best places for people to What does fulfill their brain mean? I think you should rephrase that...fulfill their dreams or challenge their mindsfullfill their brain in not a short timeIn not a short time? You should just write something like "after some time" or "a long time". All of this both offers the students the benefits of have better jobs and the well educated brain to have a better way to understand the world.

In addition, attending collge or university contributes to helping students to form their personality. On one hand, the circumstances there provide students the opportunity to experience different things and to make friends from almost all over the world. With some chances to exchange to some other countries and the chances to have lectures from some successful former schoolmates, it is not difficult for the students to find which way they want to go, as well as which kind of person the they want to be. On the other hand, compared with home school or self-learning, studying in college or university makes it possible for the students to communicate with the professors to talk about life and career plans. One of the most benefit important points of this is that the talking with the educators will avoid help the students avoidto make some mistakes and makes it easier to succeed.

Furthermore, the years in college or university are almost the best times for the students to make friends on the certain future work field. Not only does this kind of relationship help a person to gain more job chances and promotion opportunities in certain field, but it also helps to get better ways on solving certain problems in that field. Beyond that, academically, school friends on the same research change opinions more freely and this kind of communication will probably stimulate the ideas exploring new theories and the new approach to new solutions.

Adimittedly, there are also other ways for a person to achieve sucess. But having education in collge or university provides the best way to achieve that.

You can work making your writing more apprehensible but your ideas and examples were good. Nice job =)
I see some spelling errors. I hope you can get microsoft word or some other program that will check your spelling for you. I bet you could find a spell checker if you googled this:
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One of the most beneficial points of this is that the talk with the educators will enable the students to avoid some mistakes and make their success easier.

The way you write is very organized and rhythmic. I like it. You have some errors with English grammar, but when you keep practicing I think you will be one of the best! You write with excellent organization and deep insight.



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